自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，内容具体，并且使用了 because 解释原因。不过，句子较长，信息连接略显拥挤；“the fresh air coming towards me”不够自然，可以改为“enjoyed the fresh air on the way”。建议将答案分成两句，并加入一个具体感受或结果，使表达更清晰自然。

範例: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike to school every day in high school because it was only about two kilometres from my home. I really enjoyed the fresh air and the exercise, so it was a pleasant way to start my day.

建議: 回答观点明确，也提到了共享单车这一具体例子，但出现了较多停顿和重复（“Umm”“and”），影响流利度。“sharing bikes”后应使用复数代词“them”，而“how long ever you want”应改为“for as long as you want”；“automatically. Charge you”应合并为“automatically charge you”。建议使用“because”或“for example”组织原因和例子，并用两到三句完成回答。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially shared bikes in large cities. For example, people can scan a QR code to unlock one and use it for as long as they need. The app automatically charges them according to the amount of time they ride.

× We have sharing bikes which you can just scan it and use it for how long ever you want.

✓ We have sharing bikes which you can just scan and use for as long as you want.

关系代词“which”已经在从句中作“sharing bikes”的宾语，因此后面不能再使用代词“it”重复指代。由于“bikes”是复数，也不能用单数代词“it”。另外，“how long ever”不是自然的英语表达，应该使用“as long as you want”，表示“只要你想用多久都可以”。

× You can use it for how long ever you want.

✓ You can use them for as long as you want.

“how long ever”在这里搭配不正确。表示“想要多长时间”时，应使用“as long as you want”。同时，因为前文的“sharing bikes”是复数，所以应使用复数代词“them”，而不是“it”。

× And it will automatically. Charge you afterward.

✓ They will automatically charge you afterward.

“automatically”是副词，不能在句号后单独与“Charge”组成完整句子；“charge”应与前面的情态动词“will”一起构成谓语“will automatically charge”。此外，前文的“sharing bikes”是复数，因此用“They”指代更一致。注意不要把一个完整句子错误地拆成“automatically. Charge”。