自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and use the correct past tense. “I don’t have a background” is unclear; say “I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.” Also, use “when I was 18” instead of “when I entered my university at 18 years old.” Add a brief reason or detail to make the answer more complete.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I got my first one when I started university at 18. I needed it because my campus was quite large, so it was convenient for travelling between buildings.

建議: State your main idea clearly and avoid repetition, such as “in my in my country” and “has has.” Use plural and comparative forms correctly: “motorcycles are much more popular” and “bikes are more popular.” The final word “layers” is unclear; if you mean bicycles, say “most students have one.” Use a linking word such as “however” to contrast national and university trends.

範例: Not really. Motorcycles are much more popular in my country because they are faster and more convenient for travelling long distances. However, bikes are quite common at my university, as the campus is very large and students need to travel between different buildings. As a result, many students have a bicycle.

× No, I don't have a background when I were a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, so use the past tense didn't have. Also, the correct past form of be with I is was, not were. In this context, bike is the appropriate noun because the question is about having a bike.

× Not really because motorcycle is much popular in my in my country.

✓ Not really, because motorcycles are much more popular in my country.

When speaking about motorcycles in general, use the plural noun motorcycles. The plural subject requires the plural verb are.

× Not really because motorcycle is much popular in my in my country.

✓ Not really, because motorcycles are much more popular in my country.

Popular is a longer adjective, so its comparative form is more popular, not much popular. Much can be used before a comparative adjective to emphasize the difference: much more popular.

× Not really because motorcycle is much popular in my in my country.

✓ Not really, because motorcycles are much more popular in my country.

The preposition in should appear only once in the phrase in my country. Avoid repeating a preposition when it is not needed.

× But bike is a lot popular in my university because our campus is too large to travel around each building.

✓ But bikes are much more popular at my university because our campus is too large to travel around.

Use the plural noun bikes when referring to bicycles in general. The plural subject bikes takes the plural verb are.

× But bike is a lot popular in my university because our campus is too large to travel around each building.

✓ But bikes are much more popular at my university because our campus is too large to travel around.

The correct comparative form of popular is more popular. Much more popular is a natural way to make the comparison stronger. A lot popular is not the standard comparative structure.

× But bike is a lot popular in my university because our campus is too large to travel around each building.

✓ But bikes are much more popular at my university because our campus is too large to travel around.

Use at my university when referring to a university as an institution or place where an activity happens. In my university is less natural in this context.

× So each student has has layers.

✓ So each student has a bike.

The verb has is repeated, which makes the sentence structurally incorrect. Use has only once after the singular subject each student. Also, a bike is the appropriate noun for the meaning of the sentence.