自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Используйте прошедшее время, так как вопрос относится к детству: “I had a bike” вместо “I have a bike”. Для завершённого периода лучше сказать “I rode it a lot” вместо “I have been riding it all the time”. Избегайте повторов “riding” и лишнего “yeah”; выражение “it’s a very interesting riding the bike” звучит неестественно. Ответ можно сделать более связным с помощью “although” или “despite”, а также добавить конкретную деталь о велосипеде или о том, где вы на нём катались.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it a lot around my neighbourhood, although I sometimes fell off and hurt myself. Despite that, I kept practising because I really enjoyed the feeling of riding it.

建議: Начните с прямого и ясного ответа: “No, I don’t think bikes are very popular” или “Yes, they are quite popular”. Исправьте грамматику и лексику: “people use cars” вместо “use a car or machine”, “a faster mode of transport” вместо “is fast mode of transport”. Слово “machine” здесь не подходит; используйте “cars” или “motor vehicles”. Добавьте логичную причину и, если возможно, сравнение: автомобили удобнее для дальних поездок, тогда как велосипеды популярны для спорта или коротких поездок.

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. Most people prefer cars because they are faster and more comfortable for long journeys. However, cycling is becoming more common among young people who ride bikes for exercise or to avoid traffic.

× When I was a child I have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a finished period in the past, so the simple past had is required instead of the present-tense form have.

× I have been riding it all the time.

✓ I rode it all the time.

The student is describing a completed childhood experience. Therefore, the simple past rode is more appropriate than the present perfect continuous have been riding.

× It is a very interesting riding the bike.

✓ Riding a bike is very interesting.

Riding a bike functions as the subject of the sentence, so it should be placed before the verb is. The expression a very interesting riding is not a natural English construction.

× People in our country use a car or machine.

✓ People in our country use cars or other vehicles.

The sentence refers to vehicles in general, so plural nouns cars and vehicles are more appropriate than the singular expressions a car or machine.

× A machine or car is fast mode of transport.

✓ A car or another vehicle is a fast mode of transport.

A singular countable noun phrase requires an article before fast mode. The phrase should be a fast mode of transport.

× I think that now because people in our country use a car or machine and a machine or car is fast mode of transport instead of bicycle or bikes.

✓ I think that bicycles are less popular nowadays because people in my country use cars or other vehicles, which are faster modes of transport.

The original sentence has an incomplete and confusing structure because because is not connected to a complete main clause and the ideas are repeated. Use a clear main clause followed by a because clause to express the reason logically.