自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly using the past tense: “Yes, I had a black bike.” Avoid repeating words such as “black,” “for,” and “my.” Use “used” and “went” instead of “use” and “am going” because you are describing your childhood. Complete your final idea by explaining how riding made you feel, and connect the details with words such as “also” or “because.”

範例: Yes, I had a black bike when I was a child. I often used it to go to school, and sometimes I rode it with my friends. I enjoyed cycling because it made me feel independent and energetic.

建議: State your opinion clearly with “Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.” Then give one or two specific reasons, such as commuting, exercise, or shopping. Avoid unclear phrases like “I didn't inspire a public” and repeated wording such as “use the bike use many bikes.” Use accurate expressions such as “go to work,” “go shopping,” and “buy fruit and vegetables.”

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. Many people cycle to work or go shopping because bikes are inexpensive and convenient. They are also useful for buying groceries, such as fruit and vegetables.

× When I was a child, I have black black bags.

✓ When I was a child, I had a black bike.

The phrase refers to a past period, so the past-tense form had is needed instead of have. The noun has also been clarified as bike because the surrounding context is about riding a bike.

× I use it for going to school.

✓ I used it to go to school.

Because the student is describing a childhood habit, use should be changed to the past-tense form used. The infinitive structure to go is more natural than for going in this sentence.

× Sometimes I'm going with my friend by bike.

✓ Sometimes, I went to school with my friend by bike.

The answer describes a repeated activity in the past, so am going should be changed to the past-tense form went. The phrase to school clarifies the destination.

× Sometimes I'm going with my friend by bike.

✓ Sometimes, I went to school with my friend by bike.

The preposition by is correctly used with a means of transportation, but the destination needs the preposition to: went to school.

× I like riding a bike because it's made me feel

✓ I liked riding a bike because it made me feel happy.

The student is talking about a past experience, so like and make should be in the past tense: liked and made. The original sentence is incomplete, so a complement such as happy is needed after feel.

× Many people use the bike use many bikes.

✓ Many people use bikes.

The sentence repeats the verb phrase and uses the singular noun bike after many people. Use the plural form bikes when speaking about bicycles in general.

× Many people use bikes to go their jobs.

✓ Many people use bikes to go to their jobs.

The verb go requires the preposition to before a destination. Therefore, go their jobs should be changed to go to their jobs.