自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答“有”，再说明用途和相关规定。注意主谓一致：应说“everybody who lives in the city has/had a bike”；“ride”表示骑车，不是“write”；“an e-bike”前用不定冠词“an”。“Because in China follows follow the rules”结构不完整且重复，可以改为完整句，例如“People have to follow traffic rules in China”。另外，避免把普通自行车和电动自行车混淆；答案控制在2—4句，并使用“because”“so”等连接词使逻辑更清楚。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I mainly used it to ride to school and visit my friends because cycling was convenient and inexpensive. However, I was not allowed to ride an e-bike, since children had to follow the relevant traffic rules.

建議: 答案没有清楚回答“现在自行车是否流行”，后半部分出现大量停顿、重复和无法理解的表达，影响连贯性。应先明确说“Yes, bikes are still popular in China”，然后补充具体原因，如共享单车、短途通勤、环保和交通拥堵。注意时态：谈现在用一般现在时；谈过去可以说“In the late twentieth century, China was less wealthy”。避免使用“are are”“Oh”等自我修正，并确保每句话完整、意思明确。

範例: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in China, especially in large cities. Many people use shared bikes for short journeys because they are cheap and convenient. In addition, cycling helps people avoid traffic jams and is better for the environment.

× Yes of course, I think everybody live in the city would have a bike to help them get to school or anywhere.

✓ Yes, of course. I think everybody who lives in the city would have a bike to help them get to school or anywhere.

“Everybody”是第三人称单数，因此后面的动词应该使用第三人称单数形式“lives”，不能使用“live”。此外，在“everybody”和“lives”之间加上关系代词“who”，使句子结构完整。

× Yes of course, I think everybody live in the city would have a bike to help them get to school or anywhere.

✓ Yes, of course. I think everybody who lives in the city would have a bike to help them get to school or anywhere.

“everybody live in the city”缺少关系代词，不能直接把“everybody”和“live”连接起来。应使用“everybody who lives in the city”，意思是“每一个住在城市里的人”。

× Because in China follows follow the rules.

✓ In China, people follow the rules.

原句以“Because”开头，但后面没有完整的主句；同时，“follows follow”是重复的动词形式。这里可以去掉“Because”，并补充主语“people”，形成完整句子。

× You cannot write a ebike.

✓ You cannot write an e-bike.

“e-bike”以元音音素开头，因此前面应使用“an”，而不是“a”。注意：这里仅修正冠词错误；如果想表达“不能骑电动自行车”，动词应使用“ride”。

× Yes, are are you kidding?

✓ Yes, are you kidding?

“are”被重复使用了一次。一般疑问句的结构是“Are + 主语 + 其他成分”，所以应改为“Are you kidding?”。

× In the later 20th century, China is.

✓ In the late 20th century, China was not very rich.

“In the late 20th century”表示过去的时间，因此应使用过去时“was”，不能使用现在时“is”。原句“China is”后面缺少补充信息，所以补充“not very rich”使句子完整。

× In the later 20th century, China is.

✓ In the late 20th century, China was not very rich.

表示“20世纪后期”时，应使用固定表达“the late 20th century”，而不是“the later 20th century”。“late”表示某个时期的后期；“later”通常用于比较或表示“较晚的”。

× Oh China, wars sought as a nation of bad people's web.

✓ Oh, China was thought of as a nation of bad people.

“China”是“被认为”的对象，所以应使用被动语态“was thought of”，而不是错误的“wars sought”。被动语态结构是“主语 + was/were + 过去分词”。

× Oh China, wars sought as a nation of bad people's web.

✓ Oh, China was thought of as a nation of bad people.

这句话描述的是过去的看法，因此使用过去时“was”。“was thought of”中的“was”是过去时，符合“In the late 20th century”的时间背景。

× Not very rich in that time.

✓ It was not very rich at that time.

原句没有主语和完整的谓语结构，不能单独构成完整句子。补充主语“It”和动词“was”后，句子结构完整。

× Not very rich in that time.

✓ It was not very rich at that time.

表示“在那时”时，固定搭配是“at that time”，不能使用“in that time”。可以记住：“at that time”表示具体的过去时间。