自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Використайте минулий час, оскільки ви говорите про дитинство: “I didn’t have a bike.” Додайте коротку причину або деталь, щоб відповідь була змістовнішою, наприклад поясніть, чи ви ходили пішки або користувалися велосипедом друзів.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on busy roads, so I usually walked to school. However, I sometimes borrowed my friends’ bikes at the weekend.

建議: Виправте помилку в слові “buys” на “bikes” і використайте природнішу конструкцію: “I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country.” Додайте причину та конкретну деталь, наприклад порівняйте велосипеди з автомобілями або громадським транспортом. Також можна згадати виняток, наприклад популярність велосипедів серед молоді чи в сільській місцевості.

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer using cars or public transport because the roads are often busy and there are not many cycle lanes. However, cycling is becoming more popular among young people and fitness enthusiasts.

× When I was a child, I don't have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.

The phrase 'when I was a child' refers to a completed period in the past, so the verb 'have' must be in the past tense. Use 'didn't have,' not 'don't have.'

× I think buys are not popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are not popular in my country.

The word 'buys' is not the correct plural noun for bicycles. The correct plural noun is 'bikes.' Because the subject is plural, 'are' is correctly used.