自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and correct the unclear or incorrect expressions. “Buy” should be “bike,” and “write” should be “ride.” Also, “my public station” is unclear; you may mean “the local bus station” or “public places.” Use a clear reason and avoid the incomplete phrase “convenient to.”

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood and to the local bus station. It was a convenient way to get around and gave me more freedom.

建議: Give a complete and grammatically accurate answer. Replace “BY” with “bikes,” and use “especially among children” rather than “especially for children.” The phrase “experience new challenge” should be “experience new challenges,” and “after busy” is incomplete; say “after a busy day.” Add a specific supporting detail, such as where people ride bikes or why they are popular.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and young adults. They are an affordable way to travel, and many people ride them in parks or around their neighborhoods. In addition, cycling helps people relax after a busy day and stay healthy.

× I used to have a buy when I was a child and I find it more convenient to.

✓ I used to have a bike when I was a child, and I found it convenient to ride around my neighborhood.

The question asks about a past experience, so found is more appropriate than find when describing your past opinion. The phrase convenient to must be followed by a base verb, such as ride. Bike is also the correct word for the intended meaning.

× Write around my house and my public station.

✓ Ride around my neighborhood and to the public station.

The preposition around is suitable for movement within an area, while to is needed before a destination. Also, ride is the appropriate verb for traveling by bike.

× BY are more popular in my country especially for children.

✓ They are more popular in my country, especially among children.

BY is not a correct pronoun. The plural pronoun they is needed because bikes are plural. Among is more appropriate than for when referring to a group of people among whom something is popular.

× I think it's a great way to explore and experience new challenge.

✓ I think it is a great way to explore and experience new challenges.

The phrase new challenges refers to more than one possible experience, so the plural noun challenges is needed. The article a cannot be used before the plural noun challenges.

× Especially for children and I think it's a great way to explore and experience new challenges and have them unwind.

✓ They are especially popular among children, and I think bikes are a great way for children to explore, experience new challenges, and unwind.

The pronoun them is unclear because it appears to refer to bikes rather than children. Repeating children makes the meaning clear, and the coordinated verbs explore, experience, and unwind should have the same grammatical structure.

× Have them unwind after busy.

✓ Help children unwind after a busy day.

Busy is an adjective and needs a noun after it in this context. The natural expression is a busy day, so the indefinite article a is required.