自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and use consistent past tense when describing childhood: “I used to ride” or “I rode.” Correct the expressions “when I will try” to a clear phrase such as “when I had free time,” and “in my birthday” to “on my birthday.” For your current situation, use the present perfect or present simple: “I don’t use it anymore” or “I haven’t used it for years.”

範例: Yes, I did. My mother gave me a bike for my birthday, and I used to ride it whenever I had free time. I really loved it, but I don’t use it anymore because I usually travel by motorbike now.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence and avoid repeating or mispronouncing “bikes.” Use “motorbikes,” not “motorbias,” and say “Motorbikes are more popular than bicycles.” Correct the grammar in “Vietnamese pupil prefer use” to “Vietnamese people prefer using” or “Vietnamese people prefer to use.” Add a specific reason, such as convenience, speed, or the hot weather, and use a linking word like “because.”

範例: No, bicycles are not very popular in my country. Motorbikes are much more common because they are faster and more convenient for commuting. Most Vietnamese people prefer using motorbikes to travel to work or school, especially in large cities.

× I usually ride a bike when I will try.

✓ I usually rode a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past habit during childhood, so the past tense is required. Use rode instead of ride and was instead of will try. For past habits, use used to, would, or the simple past, such as I used to ride a bike when I was a child.

× I usually ride a bike when I will try.

✓ I usually rode a bike when I was a child.

Will try expresses a future action, but the student is describing a past experience. Do not use will in this past-time context. Use a past-tense clause, such as when I was a child.

× This is a present from my mother in my birthday.

✓ It was a present from my mother on my birthday.

The student is talking about a present received in the past, so use was instead of is. The pronoun it refers to the bike, and was a present is the appropriate past-tense description.

× This is a present from my mother in my birthday.

✓ It was a present from my mother on my birthday.

Use the preposition on with a specific day or date, including my birthday. The correct phrase is on my birthday, not in my birthday.

× But now I didn't use it anymore.

✓ But now I don't use it anymore.

Now refers to the present, so use the present simple do not or don't. Didn't is the past form and does not match the present-time meaning.

× Bi are bias are unpopular in my country.

✓ Bikes are unpopular in my country.

The original sentence contains repeated and incorrectly formed words, which makes the sentence structure unclear. Use the simple structure subject plus be plus adjective: Bikes are unpopular in my country.

× The more popular than bias is motorbias.

✓ More popular than bikes are motorbikes.

When comparing two things, use the comparative form more popular than. Do not use the before more unless a noun follows in a superlative or specific comparative structure. The comparison should also use the correct plural nouns bikes and motorbikes.

× Vietnamese pupil prefer use motorbike every day.

✓ Vietnamese pupils prefer using motorbikes every day.

Vietnamese pupils refers to people in general, so the plural form pupils is needed. Motorbikes should also be plural because the sentence refers to motorbikes in general.

× Vietnamese pupil prefer use motorbike every day.

✓ Vietnamese pupils prefer using motorbikes every day.

After prefer, use a gerund with this structure: prefer plus verb-ing. Therefore, prefer use should be changed to prefer using. Prefer to use is also possible, but prefer using is more suitable for this correction.