自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 質問をそのまま繰り返しており、回答になっていません。まず「Yes, I did.」または「No, I didn’t.」と直接答え、その後に自転車の種類や使った目的などの具体的な情報を1〜2文加えましょう。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven years old. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: 質問は自転車の人気について尋ねているため、「I like bikes」ではなく、「Yes, bikes are popular in my country」のように直接答えましょう。「because very life MMM is so」は不自然で意味が伝わらないため、通勤・健康・環境など具体的な理由を述べてください。また、「bike」ではなく、一般的な話には複数形の「bikes」を使い、becauseの後には完全な文を置きましょう。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people ride them to school or work because they are inexpensive and environmentally friendly. In addition, cycling is a convenient way to stay healthy.

× I like bike because very life MMM is so.

✓ I like bikes because they make life very convenient.

The countable noun bike needs an article when it refers to one bike, or it should be plural when speaking about bikes in general. Because the question asks about bikes in general, bikes is the appropriate form. Use a plural noun for general statements about things such as bikes, cars, or books.

× I like bike because very life MMM is so.

✓ I like bikes because they make life very convenient.

The second part of the original sentence does not have a clear grammatical structure. The phrase very life is incorrectly ordered, and is so is incomplete because it does not specify what is so. The corrected sentence uses the subject they, the verb make, and the object life to express the meaning clearly. When answering a speaking question, use a complete clause after because: subject + verb + complement or object.