自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 「Yes, I did.」のように質問の時制に合わせて直接答えましょう。「I had when I was child」は不自然なので、「I had a bike when I was a child」とします。また、過去の出来事なので「practice」は「practiced」に直し、「in parking」は「in a parking lot」と言います。最後に、練習の結果や感想を1文加えると、より具体的で自然な回答になります。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, but I couldn’t ride it at first, so I practiced a lot in a parking lot. Eventually, I learned to ride it without help.

建議: 「bikes」は複数形なので、「it’s popular」ではなく「they’re popular」としましょう。「ride on the bike」は一般的な意味では「ride a bike」、「to everywhere」は「everywhere」または「to get everywhere」が自然です。最初に明確な意見を述べた後、「especially young people use them to commute」など、人気の理由や具体的な利用場面をリンク語で説明すると、内容がより効果的になります。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They’re especially common among young people because they’re affordable and convenient for short journeys. For example, many students ride bikes to school or to nearby shops.

× Yes, I had when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child.

The verb had needs an object because the student is referring to a bike. Use the pronoun one to replace a bike. Also, child is a singular countable noun, so it needs the article a: a child.

× Yes, I had when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child.

The singular countable noun child needs the indefinite article a. Say a child, not child. Remember to use a or an before singular countable nouns when speaking generally or introducing them.

× I couldn't ride a bike at first, so I practice a lot in parking.

✓ I couldn't ride a bike at first, so I practiced a lot in the parking lot.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change practice to practiced. When describing a past habit, use the past form consistently.

× I couldn't ride a bike at first, so I practice a lot in parking.

✓ I couldn't ride a bike at first, so I practiced a lot in the parking lot.

Parking lot is a singular countable noun and needs an article. The natural expression is in the parking lot. Use the definite article the when referring to a specific place where the practice happened.

× Yes, it's popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The topic is bikes in general, so the plural noun bikes is more appropriate. Because bikes is plural, use the plural verb are rather than the singular form is.

× Uh, maybe everyone can ride on the bike and uh, especially younger people ride on bike to everywhere.

✓ Maybe everyone can ride a bike, and younger people especially ride bikes everywhere.

The usual expression is ride a bike, not ride on the bike, when talking about the activity in general. Also, everywhere already expresses location, so it does not need the preposition to. Practice common verb-preposition combinations such as ride a bike and go everywhere.

× Uh, maybe everyone can ride on the bike and uh, especially younger people ride on bike to everywhere.

✓ Maybe everyone can ride a bike, and younger people especially ride bikes everywhere.

Use a before the singular countable noun bike when referring to one bike in general: a bike. In the second part, use the plural form bikes to describe the activity generally.

× Uh, maybe everyone can ride on the bike and uh, especially younger people ride on bike to everywhere.

✓ Maybe everyone can ride a bike, and younger people especially ride bikes everywhere.

The second part refers to bikes in general, so the plural form bikes is needed. Use singular a bike for one general example and plural bikes for a repeated activity or general habit.