自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and add one specific detail about the bike or how you used it. Use the article “a” before “really colorful bike,” and avoid hesitation such as “Uh” if possible. A more natural phrase is “It was a really colorful bike.”

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a really colorful bike with a bright red basket. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: State your opinion clearly with “I don’t think bikes are very popular.” Then give a specific reason and connect your ideas with “because” or “as a result.” Correct the grammar: say “there are no clear rules,” “it isn’t a good idea,” and “cycling” instead of repeating “bike” as a verb. Avoid ending with the unnecessary word “actually.”

範例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. There are no clear cycling lanes or traffic rules for cyclists, so riding a bike can be quite dangerous. As a result, most people prefer to use cars or public transport.

× Uh, it was really colorful bike.

✓ Uh, it was really a colorful bike.

The singular countable noun bike needs the indefinite article a because the speaker is referring to one nonspecific bike. Place a before the adjective colorful.

× No, unfortunately I don't think so bikes are popular in my country because there is no rules for bicycles so it's not really good idea to bike actually.

✓ No, unfortunately, I do not think bikes are popular in my country because there is no rules for bicycles, so it is not really good idea to bike, actually.

The phrase I do not think so bikes is grammatically incorrect. In this sentence, think should be followed directly by the clause bikes are popular. Do not use so between think and the clause.

× No, unfortunately I don't think so bikes are popular in my country because there is no rules for bicycles so it's not really good idea to bike actually.

✓ No, unfortunately, I do not think bikes are popular in my country because there are no rules for bicycles, so it is not really good idea to bike, actually.

Use there are before a plural noun. The noun rules is plural, so the correct form is there are no rules, not there is no rules.

× No, unfortunately I don't think so bikes are popular in my country because there is no rules for bicycles so it's not really good idea to bike actually.

✓ No, unfortunately, I do not think bikes are popular in my country because there are no rules for bicycles, so it is not really good idea to bike, actually.

Rules is a plural noun, so it must be used with the plural form are. Check whether the noun after there is singular or plural, and choose is or are accordingly.

× No, unfortunately I don't think so bikes are popular in my country because there is no rules for bicycles so it's not really good idea to bike actually.

✓ No, unfortunately, I do not think bikes are popular in my country because there are no rules for bicycles, so it is not really a good idea to bike, actually.

The singular countable noun idea needs the indefinite article a. The correct phrase is not really a good idea.