自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp nhưng mắc nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Hãy dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán: “When I was a child, I had a bike” thay vì “I have”. Tránh lặp lại “my family” và “a bike”, đồng thời dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng để giải thích xe đạp gắn với kỷ niệm nào, chẳng hạn gia đình cùng đạp xe đi siêu thị. Có thể dùng từ “memorable” trong câu đầy đủ như “It was a memorable part of my childhood.”

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My family often rode our bikes to the supermarket at weekends. It was convenient, and those trips became some of my most memorable childhood experiences.

建議: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời còn nhiều từ lặp và lỗi dùng từ. Hãy nói “Bikes are very popular” thay vì “it’s so popular”, và dùng động từ “ride” chứ không phải “rise”. Nêu rõ đối tượng sử dụng hoặc lý do cụ thể, ví dụ xe đạp giúp người dân di chuyển dễ dàng, tiết kiệm chi phí và tránh tắc đường. Sử dụng từ nối như “because”, “in addition” hoặc “as a result” để liên kết các ý mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns and cities. Many people ride them because they are convenient and inexpensive. In addition, bikes help people avoid traffic jams and get some exercise.

× when I was child

✓ when I was a child

The singular countable noun child needs the indefinite article a.

× I have a bike

✓ I had a bike

The question asks about a past period, so the past-tense form had is required instead of the present-tense form have.

× my family is my family are going to the supermarket with a bike

✓ My family and I used to go to the supermarket by bike.

The original sentence has an incorrect and repeated subject. My family and I forms a clear subject, and used to go correctly describes a repeated past activity.

× a bike is so many memorable

✓ Riding a bike was very memorable.

Memorable is an adjective describing an experience, not a bike. The sentence needs the gerund phrase riding a bike as the subject. Very is also used correctly before the adjective memorable; many is used with plural countable nouns.

× I think it's so popular

✓ I think they are very popular

Bikes is plural, so it should be replaced with the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are.

× it's so convenient it's because when many when many people rise a bike, I think it's so good

✓ They are popular because riding a bike is convenient. When many people ride bikes, I think it is a good form of transportation.

The original sentence contains repeated words and several clauses joined incorrectly. Separating the ideas into two complete sentences creates a clearer grammatical structure.

× when many when many people rise a bike

✓ when many people ride bikes

For a general present-time situation, use the simple present form ride. The plural noun bikes is more natural when referring to bikes in general.