自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答与问题有关，但句子结构和词义错误较多，导致意思不清楚。应直接回答“有/没有”，并使用正确的过去时，例如将“want”改为“wanted”，将“buy”改为“bought”。另外，“house”似乎不是你想表达的词；如果你想说“我想要一辆自行车”，应使用“wanted a bike”。可以补充一个简短细节，例如朋友什么时候或为什么买给你。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I really wanted one, so my friend bought it for me as a birthday present.

建議: 你基本回答了“是”，但“saw many people to buy”搭配错误，应改为“saw many people riding bikes”或“saw many people buy bikes”。“bags”与问题不符，应使用“bikes”。为了让回答更完整，可以说明人们骑自行车的时间、地点或原因，并使用“because”连接理由。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see many students riding bikes after school because it is convenient and inexpensive.

× Yes, I want a house to buy bag so my friend buy for me.

✓ Yes, I wanted to buy a bike, so my friend bought one for me.

问题描述的是童年经历，因此应使用一般过去时：want 改为 wanted，buy 改为 bought。为了与题目保持一致，句中的 bike 也应与问题内容对应。

× Yes, I want a house to buy bag so my friend buy for me.

✓ Yes, I wanted to buy a bike, so my friend bought one for me.

原句中“want a house to buy bag”结构不完整且语序混乱。表达“想买一辆自行车”应使用“wanted to buy a bike”；两个完整分句之间用 so 连接，并在 so 前加逗号。

× Yes I saw many people to buy bags after school.

✓ Yes, I see many people riding bikes after school.

问题询问自行车现在是否流行，因此回答一般使用一般现在时：saw 改为 see。句首 Yes 后应加逗号。

× Yes I saw many people to buy bags after school.

✓ Yes, I see many people riding bikes after school.

see 后面不能直接使用“people to buy”来表达看见人们进行某活动。可以使用“see + 人 + 动词-ing”结构，即“see many people riding bikes”。同时，句意应与自行车这一话题保持一致。