自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你直接回答了“有”，但后面的表达存在严重的词汇和语法问题，例如“advice”应为“a bike”，“I was innocence”应为“I was innocent”，“I have”应改为过去时“I had”。答案中重复了“when I was a child”，并且“have lots of courage to everything”和“ride by roll bars”意思不清，影响可理解性。建议使用清晰的结构：先直接回答是否有自行车，再说明如何使用、和谁一起骑以及带来的感受。可以加入具体地点或活动，并使用“because”“for example”等连接词。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it in the park with my family at weekends. It made me feel happy and independent because I could explore the neighborhood by myself.

建議: 你表达了“自行车在中国很流行”的核心观点，也提到了共享单车，这是比较相关的细节。但“the pies”“my countries”“share buys”“screen the schools”等词语使用错误，可能分别想表达“bikes”“my country”“shared bikes”和“ride to school”。注意主谓一致和名词形式，例如“bikes are popular”“People can ride bikes every day”。建议避免重复和句末未完成的表达，并按照“观点+原因+例子”的结构组织答案。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. There are many shared bikes, so people can easily use them for short journeys. For example, some students ride bikes to school because it is convenient and environmentally friendly.

× Yes, I have advice when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

“When I was a child”表示过去的时间，因此主句中的“have”也应使用过去式“had”。同时，根据问题内容，这里应使用“a bike”来回答。

× I was innocence.

✓ I was innocent.

“Innocence”是名词，表示“天真、无辜”；在系动词“was”后面需要使用形容词，所以应改为“innocent”。

× I have lots of courage to everything.

✓ I had the courage to do everything.

整段是在描述童年经历，因此“have”应改为过去式“had”。表达“有勇气做某事”时，应使用“the courage to do something”的结构。

× I have lots of courage to everything.

✓ I had the courage to do everything.

“to”后面需要接动词原形，不能直接接“everything”。应使用“to do everything”，表示“做任何事情”。

× So have advice can make me happy.

✓ So having a bike made me happy.

当动词短语“have a bike”作主语时，需要使用动名词形式“having”。“Having a bike”表示“拥有一辆自行车这件事”。

× So have advice can make me happy.

✓ So having a bike made me happy.

这里谈论的是童年时期的经历，属于过去情况，因此“make”应改为过去式“made”。

× I also ride by roll bars and park with my family.

✓ I also rode my bike and went to the park with my family.

句子描述的是过去的童年活动，所以“ride”应改为过去式“rode”。并列的另一个过去活动也应使用过去式“went”。

× The pies is popular in my countries.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country.

这里是在泛指自行车，应该使用复数“bikes”。“My country”表示“我的国家”，country在这里指一个国家，所以使用单数形式。

× The pies is popular in my countries.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country.

主语“bikes”是复数，因此系动词应使用“are”，不能使用单数形式“is”。

× In China's there are lots of share buys in the cities.

✓ In China, there are lots of shared bikes in the cities.

国家名称“China”前面直接使用介词“in”，不能写成所有格形式“China’s”。正确表达是“In China”。

× There are lots of share buys in the cities.

✓ There are lots of shared bikes in the cities.

“共享的自行车”需要用过去分词“shared”作定语，构成“shared bikes”。“Share”是动词原形，不能直接修饰“bikes”。

× Everyone can screen the schools to ride the bikes every days.

✓ Everyone can ride bikes to school every day.

固定表达“every day”表示“每天”，day必须使用单数形式。“Every days”是错误的。

× Everyone can screen the schools to ride the bikes every days.

✓ Everyone can ride bikes to school every day.

表示“骑自行车去学校”时，应使用“ride bikes to school”。这里的方向用介词“to”，不能使用不符合语义的表达。