自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本切题，但句子不完整且搭配不自然。应在“bought me”后补充“a bike”，并最好加入一个简短的细节，例如你什么时候开始骑、骑车的用途或你的感受。可以使用“because”或“so”连接原因和结果，使回答更完整。

範例: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike when I was about six years old, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: 回答中“he’s popular”指代错误，应改为“they’re popular”或“bikes are popular”。“when I was child”应改为“when I was a child”，“my country relatively poor”应改为“my country was relatively poor”，“only can buy”应改为“could only afford”。此外，回答在“But now most people also like”处中断，导致观点不完整。建议先直接表明观点，再分别说明过去自行车受欢迎的经济原因和现在人们喜欢骑车的健康、环保或交通原因，并用“because”“however”“also”等连接词组织内容。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. In the past, many families could only afford a bicycle because the country was relatively poor. Nowadays, people still enjoy cycling because it is healthy, environmentally friendly, and convenient for short distances.

× Yes, my father bought me.

✓ Yes, my father bought me one.

“buy”后面需要说明买了什么。“bought me”会让人误解为“买了我”。这里用“one”代替前文提到的“bike”，句子结构才完整。

× Yeah, I think he's popular because when I was child my country relatively poor so many families only can buy a bike.

✓ Yeah, I think they’re popular because when I was a child, my country was relatively poor, so many families could only buy a bike.

“bikes”是复数，所以不能用表示单数男性的“he’s”，应改为复数代词“they’re”。

× when I was child

✓ when I was a child

“child”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。固定表达是“when I was a child”。

× my country relatively poor

✓ my country was relatively poor

这部分描述的是童年时期的情况，应该使用一般过去时。“poor”是形容词，需要搭配过去式系动词“was”。

× many families only can buy a bike

✓ many families could only buy a bike

句子描述的是过去的情况，因此“can”应改为过去式“could”。同时，“only”放在“could”后面更自然，表示“只能买一辆自行车”。

× But now most people also like

✓ But now, most people also like bikes.

“like”后面缺少宾语，句子意思不完整。根据上下文，应在句末补充“bikes”。