自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Use the past tense consistently: change “do have” to “had” and “have” to “had.” Also, use a more natural expression such as “It gave me something to do” instead of “something to play with.” Add one specific detail about how or where you used the bike, and connect the ideas with “because” or “so.”

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, so it gave me a fun way to spend my free time.

建議: Answer directly and avoid repetition in phrases such as “here in my country” and “this.” Use “bikes” or “them” instead, and say “in their free time” rather than “during free times.” To make the answer more effective, include a specific example, such as people riding bikes for exercise, commuting, or leisure.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. People of all ages ride them in their free time, especially in parks and along rivers. They are popular because they are enjoyable, affordable, and good for people’s health.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child and it was great since I have something to play with during my free time.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and it was great because I had something to play with during my free time.

The phrase when I was a child refers to the past, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Use had instead of do have and had instead of have. Because is also more natural than since when giving a reason. ID: 5.

× I honestly believe that bikes are really popular here in my country because many people of all ages have this. They use this during free times as well and it's fun.

✓ I honestly believe that bikes are really popular here in my country because many people of all ages have them. They use them during their free time as well, and it's fun.

This refers to a singular object, but bikes is plural. Use the plural pronoun them to refer to bikes in both places. Free time is generally an uncountable expression, so use free time rather than free times. ID: 12.