自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You repeated the question instead of answering it, and “bite” is incorrect here; the correct word is “bike.” Give a direct answer first, then add one or two specific details, such as when you got the bike, how often you used it, or where you rode it.

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: You repeated the question rather than expressing your opinion, and “bias” should be “bikes.” Start with a clear opinion and support it with a specific reason or example, such as cycling for exercise, transportation, or environmental reasons.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people ride them for exercise, and they are also a convenient way to travel short distances.