自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and use the correct expression “when I was five years old,” not “when I was five years.” Correct the prepositions and word choice: say “riding on the roads” and “the colour of my bike was pink,” not “the colour on my back.” You could also add one specific detail about where you rode or how you felt. Avoid repeating “I remember.”

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was five years old. It was pink, and I often rode it on the roads near my home with my siblings. I really enjoyed cycling because it gave me a sense of freedom.

建議: Give a clear answer first, then support it with a reason or example. Avoid unnecessary fillers such as “by the way” and repetition such as “many, many.” Use the comparative structure “there are more bikes than motorcycles or cars” and the natural phrase “take part in bike tours” or “go on bike tours.”

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. In fact, there are more bicycles than motorcycles or cars in some areas because cycling is affordable and convenient. At weekends, many people take part in organised bike tours.

× Yes, I remember that I had a bike when I was five years.

✓ Yes, I remember that I had a bike when I was five years old.

The phrase five years must be followed by old when describing a person's age. Use five years old, not five years, after the verb was.

× I remember riding with my siblings in on roads and the colour on my back was pink.

✓ I remember riding with my siblings on the roads, and the colour of my bike was pink.

Use on, not in on, for riding on roads. Use of to show the relationship between the colour and the bike. The phrase colour of my bike is the natural expression.

× Yes, the bikes are popular and by the way, there are many, many bikes more than motorcycles or cars in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular and, by the way, there are many more bikes than motorcycles or cars in my country.

Do not use the definite article the before a plural noun when speaking about bikes in general. Therefore, use bikes are popular instead of the bikes are popular.

× Yes, the bikes are popular and by the way, there are many, many bikes more than motorcycles or cars in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular and, by the way, there are many more bikes than motorcycles or cars in my country.

Use the comparative structure many more + plural noun + than when comparing quantities. The phrase many, many bikes more than is not grammatically correct.

× Every weekend, people participate in bikes tours.

✓ Every weekend, people participate in bike tours.

When one noun modifies another noun, the modifying noun is usually singular. Therefore, use bike tours, not bikes tours.