自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is direct and understandable, but it needs the article “a” before “child”: “when I was a child.” To make the answer more effective, add one specific supporting detail, such as how often you used the bike or where you rode it.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, especially at weekends.

建議: Your main idea is clear, but the sentence contains several grammar and word-choice errors. Say “Bikes are very popular in my country because they are easy for everyone to access,” and use “everywhere” instead of “everyhare.” Add a specific reason or example, such as bikes being affordable, convenient, or useful for commuting.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and easy for people to use. Many people ride them to work or school, especially in crowded cities.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The singular countable noun child needs the indefinite article a. Use a before a singular countable noun when referring to one person or thing in a general way.

× In my country, bikes are so popular everyone to easy to access everyhare.

✓ In my country, bikes are so popular that they are easy for everyone to access.

The conjunction that is needed after so popular to connect the cause and result. The structure is so + adjective + that + clause. For example: Bikes are so popular that many people use them.

× In my country, bikes are so popular everyone to easy to access everyhare.

✓ In my country, bikes are so popular that they are easy for everyone to access.

The original sentence has an incomplete and incorrect structure: everyone to easy to access. Use a complete clause with the subject they and the verb are, followed by the pattern easy for someone to do something. Also, use access instead of the unclear expression everyhare. A useful pattern is: Something is easy for people to access.