自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你没有回答考官的问题，而是重复并改写了问题。注意搭配应为“when you were a child”，但在考试中应直接回答“是”或“不是”，然后补充具体细节，例如谁买的、何时骑以及骑车的感受。建议使用“Actually, yes/no. + 具体原因或例子”的结构。

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: 你重复了考官的问题，没有表达自己的观点，因此没有展示内容、词汇或连贯性。应先明确回答“是”或“不是”，再说明流行的原因，并可加入具体场景或人群。建议使用“Personally, I think... because... For example...”来组织答案，控制在2至4句话。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who commute short distances. They are affordable, convenient, and environmentally friendly, so many people use them instead of driving.

× Did you have a bike when your child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

“When you were a child”表示“当你还是个孩子时”，这里需要过去式系动词“were”。原句中的“your”是物主限定词，表示“你的”，不能代替“you were”。建议注意一般过去时中 be 动词的变化：I was，you/we/they were，he/she/it was。

× Did you have a bike when your child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

可数名词单数“child”前通常需要冠词或其他限定词。这里表达“一个孩子”这一身份，应使用不定冠词“a”，所以是“a child”。建议在使用单数可数名词时检查前面是否需要 a、an、the 或物主限定词。