自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor; ancak “Yeah, I had a bike” ifadesi tekrarlanmış ve bazı bölümler anlaşılmıyor. “When I was a child” ve “my grandma bought it for me” gibi doğru ve doğal yapılar kullanmalısınız. Bisikletin rengi ve özellikleriyle ilgili ayrıntı vermeniz iyi, fakat “it contained 2 little” ifadesi yerine “it had two small wheels” demelisiniz. Cevabı 3–4 net cümleyle ve uygun bağlaçlarla düzenleyin.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandmother bought it for me, and it was small and yellow. I was very excited because it had two small wheels and was easy to ride. I often rode it near my house.

建議: Ana fikriniz anlaşılabiliyor, ancak “bikes are popular” ifadesiyle devamındaki “people don’t use bikes” fikri çelişiyor. Daha net olmak için bisikletlerin çocuklar arasında popüler olduğunu, fakat yetişkinlerin araba kullandığını belirtin. “Bike Rd.” yerine “bike lanes” veya “cycling paths”, “for child” yerine “among children” ve “use car” yerine “use cars” kullanmalısınız. “That’s why” bağlacını doğru sonuç ilişkisi kurmak için kullanın ve cevabı birkaç doğal cümleye bölün.

範例: Bikes are quite popular among children in my country, but they are less common among adults. One reason is that many cities do not have enough bike lanes or cycling paths. As a result, adults usually prefer to drive cars, especially for commuting. However, children often ride bikes for fun in their neighborhoods.

× I had lum small bike.

✓ I had a small bike.

A singular countable noun such as bike normally needs an article. Use a before small bike because it is mentioned for the first time. Also, small correctly comes before the noun.

× My grandma bought for me.

✓ My grandma bought it for me.

The verb buy needs a direct object in this sentence. Use the pronoun it to refer to the bike: bought it for me.

× Yeah, bikes are popular, but. For child

✓ Yeah, bikes are popular, but not for children.

But must connect two parts of a sentence and should not be followed by a full stop. Use not for children to show the contrast. Children should be plural when speaking about children in general.

× For child

✓ For children

When referring to children in general, use the plural form children rather than the singular form child.

× We don't have any bike Rd.

✓ We don't have any bike lanes.

The phrase bike Rd. is unclear and appears to be a transcription error. Bike lanes is the natural plural noun for designated areas for bicycles. The quantifier any is appropriate with the plural countable noun lanes in a negative sentence.

× That's why people don't use bikes, they prefer to use car generally.

✓ That's why people don't use bikes; they generally prefer to use cars.

The original sentence joins two complete clauses with only a comma, creating a comma splice. Use a semicolon to separate the clauses. Generally is placed before the main verb prefer, and cars must be plural when referring to cars in general.

× They prefer to use car generally.

✓ They generally prefer to use cars.

Use the plural noun cars when talking about cars in general. The adverb generally is more naturally placed before the main verb prefer.

× They prefer to use car generally.

✓ They generally prefer to use cars.

The adverb generally usually appears before the main verb in this structure: generally prefer. The noun car also needs to be plural because the sentence refers to cars in general.