自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: This is a clear and well-developed answer. You answer the question directly, give two reasons, and add a relevant result. However, avoid fillers such as “uh” and reduce repetition of “bike” and “when I was a child.” You could also use a slightly more natural phrase such as “I never learned how to ride one.”

範例: No, I didn’t. My parents never bought me a bike, and I wasn’t particularly interested in cycling because I preferred reading and playing indoor games. As a result, I never learned how to ride one.

建議: You give a direct opinion and provide supporting details, but some vocabulary and sentence structures are inaccurate. “Floors” should be “flat roads” or “bike paths,” and “bankments” should probably be “embankments.” Use a linking phrase such as “In addition” and explain why people use bikes, for example, for commuting, exercise, or leisure. Avoid repeating “where you can ride your bike.”

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and fitness enthusiasts. There are many dedicated bike paths and scenic embankments where people can cycle. In addition, some people use bicycles to commute because they are affordable and environmentally friendly.

× There are a lot of floors, roads where you can ride your bike.

✓ There are a lot of flat roads where you can ride your bike.

The phrase “floors, roads” is not grammatically or structurally correct in this context. “Flat roads” is the appropriate noun phrase for roads suitable for cycling. Try checking whether the nouns and adjectives in a phrase are logically connected.

× Also there are some bankments where you can ride your bike and enjoy yourself.

✓ There are also some embankments where you can ride your bike and enjoy yourself.

The adverb “also” is more naturally placed after the verb “are” in this sentence. In addition, “embankments” is the correct spelling of the word. Try placing “also” after the form of “be” when adding another point.