自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接回应了问题，也提供了购买者、年龄和练习地点等细节，但存在明显的语法和表达问题。首先，不能说“ I had one my father bought it”，应改为“I had one that my father bought for me”。其次，“I was very tall”与语境不太合理，可能想表达“我还很小”，应使用“I was very young”。“practice it”应改为“practised riding it”，因为 practice 后面通常需要具体说明练习的内容。最后，答案以“and it brought”结尾，句子不完整；建议用完整的结果句收尾，例如说明骑自行车让你感到快乐或更加独立。

範例: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike when I was about five years old. I was very young, so he taught me how to ride it, and we often practised in the park together. It was a lot of fun and helped me become more independent.

建議: 回答包含了过去和现在的对比以及原因，但开头的“Yes, it was very popular but not now”逻辑不够清楚，因为问题询问的是现在是否流行。建议先明确回答“Bikes are still popular, especially in cities”，再解释共享单车、环保或交通拥堵等原因。时态需要统一：过去应使用“didn't have”和“were”，现在应使用“have become”和“can afford”。此外，“in the past years”不自然，可改为“in recent years”，并避免笼统地说“Most Chinese don't have cars”，因为这可能不准确。

範例: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. In the past, many people relied on bicycles because they could not afford cars. However, as people have become wealthier, more families have bought cars. Nowadays, many people also cycle because of traffic congestion, environmental concerns, and the popularity of bike-sharing services.

× Yes, I had one my father bought it for me when I was about five years old.

✓ Yes, I had one that my father bought for me when I was about five years old.

原句把两个句子直接连接在一起，并且在关系从句中重复使用了“it”。应使用“that”引导定语从句，表示“我父亲给我买的那辆自行车”。

× Yes, I had one my father bought it for me when I was about five years old.

✓ Yes, I had one that my father bought for me when I was about five years old.

“one”已经代替了前面提到的自行车，后面的关系从句中不能再使用“it”作为宾语。可以说“one that my father bought”，不能说“one ... bought it”。

× I was very tall so my father told me how to ride it and we usually practice it in the park and it brought

✓ I was very tall, so my father told me how to ride it, and we usually practiced riding it in the park.

这段话描述的是童年时期的经历，因此“practice”应使用过去式“practiced”。另外，“practice”后面表示进行某项活动时，通常使用动名词“riding”。原句最后的“and it brought”没有完成，属于不完整表达，因此应删除或补充完整。

× I was very tall so my father told me how to ride it and we usually practice it in the park and it brought

✓ I was very tall, so my father told me how to ride it, and we usually practiced riding it in the park.

“practice”表示练习某项活动时，后面通常接动名词，即“practice riding”，而不是“practice it”。建议记住：practice + 动词-ing，例如“practice speaking English”。

× I was very tall so my father told me how to ride it and we usually practice it in the park and it brought

✓ I was very tall, so my father told me how to ride it, and we usually practiced riding it in the park.

原句以“and it brought”结尾，但“brought”后面缺少完整内容，听起来像话没有说完。回答口语问题时，应确保句子完整；如果没有要表达的后续信息，可以直接在“park”后结束句子。

× Yes, it was very popular but not now because about ten years ago we probably don't have a lot of money to buy cars.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular now, but they weren't as popular about ten years ago because we probably didn't have a lot of money to buy cars.

问题询问自行车现在是否流行，因此现在的情况应使用一般现在时“are”。“about ten years ago”表示过去，后面的“don't have”应改为过去式“didn't have”。此外，“bikes”是复数，应该使用代词“they”，而不是“it”。

× Yes, it was very popular but not now because about ten years ago we probably don't have a lot of money to buy cars.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular now, but they weren't as popular about ten years ago because we probably didn't have a lot of money to buy cars.

“bikes”是复数名词，因此代词应使用复数形式“they”，不能使用单数代词“it”。同时，表达现在和过去的对比时，应明确使用“they are”和“they were”。

× Yes, it was very popular but not now because about ten years ago we probably don't have a lot of money to buy cars.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular now, but they weren't as popular about ten years ago because we probably didn't have a lot of money to buy cars.

“about ten years ago”明确表示过去，所以“don't have”应改为过去式“didn't have”。时间状语是判断时态的重要依据：看到“ago”“last year”等过去时间表达，通常使用一般过去时。

× Most Chinese don't have cars, but in the past years Chinese people get rich and people have cars.

✓ Most Chinese people didn't have cars, but over the past few years, Chinese people have become richer, and more people have cars.

这句话描述过去与现在的变化。“in the past years”部分描述过去几年的变化，不能使用一般现在时“get rich”；应使用“have become richer”表示逐渐变得更富有。若明确描述过去某一时间，也可以说“became richer”。

× Most Chinese don't have cars, but in the past years Chinese people get rich and people have cars.

✓ Most Chinese people didn't have cars, but over the past few years, Chinese people have become richer, and more people have cars.

“get rich”不能准确表达“过去几年逐渐变富”的变化。这里使用现在完成时“have become richer”，表示从过去持续到现在的变化。现在的结果“more people have cars”使用一般现在时是正确的。

× Most Chinese don't have cars, but in the past years Chinese people get rich and people have cars.

✓ Most Chinese people didn't have cars, but over the past few years, Chinese people have become richer, and more people have cars.

“in the past years”不是这里最自然的表达。表示“在过去几年中”应使用“over the past few years”。建议记住：“over the past few years”常用于描述从过去持续到现在的变化。