自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 質問にはまず「Yes, I did.」と直接答え、その後に具体的な思い出を1〜2文で説明しましょう。「bar」は文脈上「bike」の言い間違いだと思われます。また、「when I was chill」は「when I was a child」、「I go」は過去形の「I went」に直してください。文を繰り返さず、because や so などの接続語を使って、いつ・どこで・何をしたかを明確に述べるとよいです。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and I rode it around my neighborhood every morning. I really enjoyed cycling because it gave me a sense of freedom.

建議: 最初に「Yes, they are」または「No, they aren't」と立場を明確に示しましょう。現在の状況を説明する質問なので、「adult people is」ではなく「many adults don't ride bikes」、「car is most」ではなく「cars are more popular」と表現してください。繰り返しや「Mm」「so so」を避け、対比を表す「although」や理由を示す「because」を使って、若者と大人の違いなど具体的な情報を加えましょう。

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular among adults in my country. Many people prefer driving because cars are more convenient for commuting and shopping. However, bicycles are quite popular with children and people who enjoy exercising.

× I had bike.

✓ I had a bike.

The singular countable noun bike needs an article. Use a before a singular countable noun when mentioning it generally or for the first time.

× I had bike were chill when I was chill

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence combines words without a correct sentence structure. Use the pattern subject + verb + object, followed by the time expression when I was a child. Child is the correct noun here; chill is an adjective with a different meaning.

× I go around the bike.

✓ I rode my bike around my neighborhood.

The question asks about a past period in your childhood, so the verb should be in the past tense. The past tense of ride is rode. Use rode my bike rather than go around the bike.

× So like yeah bike every morning

✓ I rode my bike every morning.

The original expression does not contain a complete verb phrase. A complete sentence needs a subject and a verb. Add I as the subject and rode as the past-tense verb.

× Mostly adult people

✓ Most adults

When referring to adults in general, use the plural noun adults. Most is more natural than mostly before a noun when expressing the majority of a group.

× Adult people is no bike

✓ Most adults do not ride bikes.

The plural subject adults takes do not, not is. The phrase ride bikes is also the natural verb phrase for describing the activity.

× Car is most

✓ Cars are more common.

Cars refers to vehicles in general, so the noun should be plural. The plural subject cars takes the plural verb are. More common is the appropriate phrase for comparing cars and bikes.

× Car is most

✓ Cars are more popular than bikes.

The sentence compares cars with bikes, so use the comparative form more popular than. The word most is a superlative and requires comparison with a whole group, such as the most popular vehicle.