自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly using the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. The phrase “I do had” is grammatically incorrect; say “I had a bike.” You could add one specific detail, such as how often you used it or where you rode it, to make the answer more developed and natural.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring the area with my friends.

建議: Your answer is relevant and includes a comparison between the past and the present, but it contains several grammatical errors, repetitions, and hesitations. Use “I used to ride a bicycle to school and college” instead of “I used to have on bicycle,” and say “I did a lot of cycling” rather than “I did many cycling.” Organize the response with a clear opinion, a reason or example, and a contrast using linking words such as “For example,” “However,” and “Nowadays.”

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who use them for exercise. For example, I used to ride my bicycle to school and college when I was younger. However, I do not cycle as much nowadays because I usually use Uber for my daily transportation.

× Yes I do had the bike during my childhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bike during my childhood.

The question asks about a past experience, so the simple past tense had is required. Do had is not a correct verb combination because do is unnecessary when had is the main verb in a simple past sentence.

× Yes I do had the bike during my childhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bike during my childhood.

Use the indefinite article a because you are mentioning one bike for the first time, not a specific bike already known to the listener. The bike incorrectly suggests that the listener already knows which bike you mean.

× I used to head on bicycle while I used to go to the, my school, my college.

✓ I used to ride a bicycle when I went to school or college.

A singular countable noun such as bicycle normally needs an article, so use a bicycle. Also, school does not need the when referring to the general activity of attending school.

× I ride many, uh, I did many cycling during my childhood.

✓ I rode a lot and did a lot of cycling during my childhood.

The phrase during my childhood refers to the past, so ride should be changed to the simple past form rode. The phrase did many cycling is also incorrect because cycling is an uncountable activity; use did a lot of cycling instead.

× I did many cycling during my childhood.

✓ I did a lot of cycling during my childhood.

Many is used with plural countable nouns, such as many bike rides. Cycling is an uncountable activity, so use a lot of cycling or much cycling. In this context, a lot of cycling sounds more natural.

× But nowadays, that not much.

✓ But nowadays, I do not cycle much.

The original clause is missing a correctly formed verb. Use do not cycle to express a present-time negative habit. The subject I is also needed to make the sentence complete.

× But nowadays, that not much.

✓ But nowadays, I do not cycle much.

Nowadays refers to the present, so use the present simple form do not cycle. The present simple is appropriate for describing a current habit or routine.

× I used to have uh, I used to head on bicycle while I used to go to the, my school, my college, I ride many, uh, I did many cycling during my childhood, but nowadays, uh, that not much.

✓ I used to ride a bicycle when I went to school or college. I did a lot of cycling during my childhood, but nowadays, I do not cycle much.

The original response combines several clauses with incomplete phrases, repetition, and comma splices. Separate the ideas into complete sentences and use clear connectors such as when and but.