自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Используйте прошедшее время, поскольку вопрос относится к детству: “I had”, а не “I have”. Также исправьте конструкцию “when I child” на “when I was a child”. Ответ слишком короткий и не содержит дополнительной детали; добавьте, например, как часто вы ездили на велосипеде или для чего его использовали.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed it.

建議: Начните с более естественной формы во множественном числе: “bicycles/bikes are”, а не “bicycle are”. Устраните повтор “bike bikes” и используйте параллельную конструкцию: “for exercising or going to school or university”. Связь идей уже присутствует благодаря “because” и “so”, но ответ можно сделать естественнее и точнее, например объяснить, что велосипеды популярны среди молодых людей, хотя в целом не являются основным видом транспорта.

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most older people prefer to travel by car. However, they are quite common among young people, who use them for exercise or to get to school and university. Overall, bikes are more popular for recreation than for daily transportation.

× Yes, I have a bike when I child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past period in the speaker's childhood, so use the past form had instead of have. The verb be must also be in the past form was in the clause when I was a child.

× Yes, I have a bike when I child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The clause when I child is incomplete because it has no verb. Add the verb was to form the complete clause when I was a child.

× Yes, I have a bike when I child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The singular countable noun child needs the indefinite article a. The correct phrase is a child.

× I don't think bicycle are very popular in my country because most older people prefer to use cars. So bike bikes are mainly used by young people for exercise or go to school or university.

✓ I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most older people prefer to use cars. So, bikes are mainly used by young people for exercise or going to school or university.

Use the plural noun bicycles when speaking about bicycles in general. Also, bike bikes is an incorrect repetition; use bikes. After for, use parallel forms: for exercise or going to school or university.

× I don't think bicycle are very popular in my country because most older people prefer to use cars. So bike bikes are mainly used by young people for exercise or go to school or university.

✓ I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most older people prefer to use cars. So, bikes are mainly used by young people for exercise or going to school or university.

The plural subject bicycles must take the plural verb are. The corrected sentence uses bicycles are, which follows the subject-verb agreement rule.

× I don't think bicycle are very popular in my country because most older people prefer to use cars. So bike bikes are mainly used by young people for exercise or go to school or university.

✓ I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most older people prefer to use cars. So, bikes are mainly used by young people for exercise or going to school or university.

The phrase for exercise or going to school uses parallel structures after for. Use the -ing form going to match the noun exercise and the intended activity.