自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接且理由清楚，但有两处语法和表达问题：应说“when I was a child”，并将过去的“think”改为“thought”。“get a bicycle”在这里不如“ride a bike”自然。建议加入一个具体结果或补充细节，例如父母担心交通安全，所以你小时候主要步行或乘坐公交车。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was too dangerous for me to ride one. They were worried about traffic accidents, so I usually walked or took the bus instead.

建議: 观点明确，也提供了地点细节，但第二句缺少主语和正确语序，应改为“Bikes are very popular in my country”。“Back in our country”不适合描述当前情况，可以用“In my country”。此外，“along the street”和“everywhere”有些重复，建议使用连接词并补充骑自行车的原因，例如环保、健康或交通便利。

範例: Absolutely. Bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. For example, you can see people cycling along the riverside and on dedicated bike paths because cycling is healthy, environmentally friendly, and convenient for short trips.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was child because my parents think it is dangerous for kids to get a bicycle.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was dangerous for kids to get a bicycle.

“child”是可数名词，单数形式前需要使用不定冠词“a”，所以应说“when I was a child”。

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was child because my parents think it is dangerous for kids to get a bicycle.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was dangerous for kids to get a bicycle.

整句话是在描述童年时期的情况，因此“think”和“is”应使用过去式“thought”和“was”，与过去时间保持一致。

× Back in our country is very popular.

✓ Back in our country, bikes are very popular.

原句缺少主语，不能直接说“our country is very popular”，因为这里想表达的是“自行车很受欢迎”。应补充主语“bikes”，并使用复数动词“are”。