自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答没有直接、完整地说明情况，且出现了明显的语法和表达问题，例如“I don't have”应使用过去时“I didn't have”，“I were a child”应改为“when I was a child”，“he have”应改为“he had”。“my own own”重复，句末“and sometimes”也没有完成意思。建议先直接回答，再补充表亲的自行车以及你是否偶尔骑他的车；避免在回答中停顿或使用“How to say that?”。

範例: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. However, my cousin had one, and I sometimes borrowed it to ride around our neighborhood. I really enjoyed it, although I wished I had a bike of my own.

建議: 回答有明确观点和原因，但“bikes”是复数，因此应使用“they are”，而不是“it is”；“his own bike grade”表达不清，可能想说“when they are in primary school”或“at a young age”。句末“So”是不完整的，应该补充具体结果或例子。建议说明自行车为什么受欢迎，例如价格便宜、方便短途出行，或孩子们可以用它和朋友一起玩。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among children. They are relatively inexpensive and convenient for short trips. Many children also enjoy riding bikes with their friends in parks or around their neighborhoods.

× Actually I don't have my own own bike, I were a child.

✓ Actually, I didn't have my own bike when I was a child.

问题发生在过去，所以要用一般过去时。"don't have" 应改为 "didn't have"。另外，"when I was a child" 比原来的表达更完整、自然。

× I were a child.

✓ I was a child.

主语是第一人称单数 "I"，be 动词过去式应使用 "was"，不能使用 "were"。

× I were a child, but how to say that?

✓ I didn't have my own bike when I was a child.

原句把几个不完整的表达连接在一起，句子结构不完整。可以用 "when" 引导时间从句，清楚表达“我小时候”。

× My cousin, he have his own bikes.

✓ My cousin has his own bike.

主语 "my cousin" 是第三人称单数，所以动词应使用 "has"，不能使用 "have"。这里说的是一辆自行车，因此用单数 "bike" 更合适。

× My cousin, he have his own bikes and sometimes.

✓ My cousin has his own bike, and sometimes he let me ride it.

原句以 "and sometimes" 结尾，意思没有完成，属于不完整句子。补充 "he let me ride it" 后，句子结构完整，意思也更清楚。

× I think it is very popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country.

主语是复数名词 "bikes"，所以 be 动词应使用复数形式 "are"，不能使用单数形式 "is"。同时直接使用 "bikes" 比代词 "it" 更清楚。

× So

✓ 删除 "So"，或将其连接到完整句子中。

"So" 单独出现不是完整句子，而且前面的意思已经结束。口语中可以删除它，避免留下不完整的表达。