自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本直接，但时态和表达不准确。谈论童年经历时，应使用一般过去时：将 “don't have” 改为 “didn't have”；“pay that” 不符合英语习惯，可以说 “couldn't afford one”。建议先直接回答，再补充一个具体原因，形成完整的两句话。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. We had to spend our money on more important things, such as food and school supplies.

建議: 回答没有清楚表达“自行车在你所在国家是否流行”，句子结构和时态错误较多。“when I was child”应改为 “when I was a child”，“my friends. Have had”应合并并改为 “many of my friends had bikes”。建议使用现在时回答当前情况，再用过去经历作为具体例子，并用 “because” 或 “for example” 连接细节。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and young adults. For example, many of my friends had bicycles when we were young, and they used them to travel around town and visit each other.

× No, I don't have because my family can't pay that.

✓ No, I didn't have one because my family couldn't afford one.

问题发生在过去（“when you were a child”），所以应使用过去时。将“don't have”改为“didn't have”。同时，原因也发生在过去，因此将“can't”改为“couldn't”。回答过去经历时，应保持整句话的时态一致。

× No, I don't have because my family can't pay that.

✓ No, I didn't have one because my family couldn't afford one.

“couldn't”是“can't”的过去式，表示过去没有能力负担。回答过去发生的事情时，情态动词也要使用相应的过去形式。

× Yes, when I was child, my friends. Have had a bicycle to travel in the town.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my friends had bicycles to travel around town.

“my friends.”只有主语，没有谓语动词，因此是一个不完整的句子。不能在主语后面直接使用句号，应将主语和谓语连接起来，组成完整句子。

× Yes, when I was child, my friends. Have had a bicycle to travel in the town.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my friends had bicycles to travel around town.

原句把“my friends”和“Have had”错误地分成了两个部分，导致句子结构不完整。“my friends had bicycles”是正确的主语加谓语结构。回答时还应避免在主语后随意断句。

× Yes, when I was child, my friends. Have had a bicycle to travel in the town.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my friends had bicycles to travel around town.

“when I was a child”描述的是过去的时间，因此朋友拥有自行车这件事也应使用一般过去时。“Have had”是现在完成时，不符合这里的过去时间背景，应改为“had”。

× Yes, when I was child, my friends. Have had a bicycle to travel in the town.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my friends had bicycles to travel around town.

“child”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词，所以应说“a child”，不能说“was child”。当表示“我小时候”时，常用固定表达“when I was a child”。