自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the examiner's question directly instead of repeating it. Start with a clear yes-or-no statement, then add one or two specific details, such as when you used the bike and where you rode it.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about eight years old and usually rode it around my neighborhood with my friends. It was a little too big for me at first, but I really enjoyed riding it.

建議: The answer is difficult to understand because “the bar” and “to avoid a cham” do not fit the question. Use the correct word “bike” or “bicycle,” give a direct opinion, and support it with a clear reason and a specific example. Use linking words such as “because” or “for example” to connect your ideas.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and young adults. Many people ride them because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. For example, you can often see people cycling in parks and on dedicated bike paths at weekends.

× Yes, the bar is very popular in our country to avoid a cham.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because they help people avoid traffic jams.

The word 'bikes' should be plural because the question asks about bikes in general. A plural noun used generally does not need the definite article 'the'. Also, 'the bar' is not grammatically appropriate for the intended meaning; it appears to be a mistaken form of 'bike'. The phrase 'to avoid a cham' is unclear and should be replaced with the complete expression 'because they help people avoid traffic jams.'