自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. Respond directly with a clear yes-or-no statement, then add a specific detail or short personal example. Use the past tense accurately because the question refers to your childhood.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: Your answer is grammatically understandable, but it is too brief and repetitive. After stating your opinion, explain why bikes are popular and provide a specific example, such as commuting, exercise, or environmental concerns. Use a linking word such as “because” or “for example” to develop your response.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. For example, many people cycle to work or use shared bicycles to avoid traffic and reduce pollution.