自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response does not answer the examiner's question; instead, it asks an unrelated question about having a bath. Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details about your childhood bike, such as when you rode it, where you used it, or who taught you. Avoid repeating the examiner's question and keep your answer within three to five sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about six, and I usually cycled around my neighborhood with my friends. It was a small blue bike, and I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without training wheels.

建議: Your response does not address whether bikes are popular in your country; it changes the topic to an unclear question about “sparks.” State your opinion directly, then support it with relevant reasons or examples, such as cycling for exercise, commuting, or environmental benefits. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” and “however” to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and fitness enthusiasts. This is because cycling is an inexpensive way to exercise and avoid traffic. For example, many people ride bicycles in parks or use them for short journeys, although busy roads can sometimes make cycling unsafe.