自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接表达了“有自行车”，并补充了父亲教你骑车这一具体细节，内容方向正确。但句子过长，缺少连接和标点；“it’s not only...it’s also...”结构使用不完整；“a witness for my groups”表达不自然，可能想说“见证了我的成长”，应改为“a reminder of my childhood”或“a witness to my growth”。建议将答案分成2—3句，并使用“because”或“also”使逻辑更清楚。

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was a child, and my father taught me how to ride it. It was more than just a present because it reminds me of my childhood and the time I spent with my father.

建議: 答案能够直接回答问题，也提到了共享单车这一相关例子，内容较具体。不过“Actually is yes”应改为“Actually, yes”；“People not only have...”结构不完整，且“on the street or on the road”重复；“go anywhere they want”过于笼统。建议使用“because”说明受欢迎的原因，并准确表达“除了拥有自己的自行车，人们还可以使用共享单车”，让句子更自然、紧凑。

範例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big cities, because shared bikes are cheap and convenient. People can simply rent one through a mobile app and use it for short trips or commuting.

× Yes, when I was a child my parents bought a bike for me and my father taught me how to ride the bike and it's not only a gift for me it's also a witness for my groups.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents bought a bike for me, and my father taught me how to ride the bike. It's not only a gift for me, but it's also a witness for my groups.

“not only”通常要和“but also”搭配使用，不能只说“not only...it's also”。应改为“not only...but also...”来连接两个并列部分。

× Yes, when I was a child my parents bought a bike for me and my father taught me how to ride the bike and it's not only a gift for me it's also a witness for my groups.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents bought a bike for me, and my father taught me how to ride the bike. It's not only a gift for me, but it's also a witness for my groups.

原句包含多个完整意思，却全部用“and”连接，形成过长的连句。应使用逗号和句号拆分句子，使句子结构更清楚。

× Actually is yes and in many cities in my country there are lots of shared bikes.

✓ Actually, yes. In many cities in my country, there are lots of shared bikes.

“Actually is yes”语序错误，英语中应说“Actually, yes”。同时，原句包含两个独立意思，拆成两个句子后结构更完整、更自然。

× People not only have their own bikes when they are on the street or on the road, they can have a shared bike to go anywhere they want.

✓ People not only have their own bikes, but they can also use shared bikes when they are on the street or on the road to go anywhere they want.

“not only”后面需要使用“but also”来构成完整的并列结构。这里应将“they can”改为“but they can also”，表示人们不仅拥有自己的自行车，也可以使用共享单车。