自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答的核心意思是清楚的，但时态、搭配和句子结构问题较多。应该用一般过去时描述童年经历，例如把“have”改为“had”，“buys”改为“bought”，把“in my child try”改为“when I was a child”。此外，“It helps”重复且表达不完整，可以直接说明自行车帮助你学习保持平衡和骑车。建议使用“because”连接原因，并控制在2—3个完整句子内。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and it helped me learn how to balance and ride. I spent a lot of time cycling around my neighborhood.

建議: 回答了问题并提到疫情后的户外活动，但开头“I am”不正确，应该说“Yes, definitely”或“Yes, I do”。“people's much more like the outside”以及“make people going out”搭配不自然，应改为“people prefer spending time outdoors”和“encourage people to go outside”。建议按照“观点—原因—具体结果”的结构组织答案，并减少“because”“very good”等重复表达。

範例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country because many people prefer spending time outdoors after the COVID-19 pandemic. Cycling is also an affordable way to exercise and travel around the city.

× Of course I have a bike in my child try because my father buys for me.

✓ Of course, I had a bike when I was a child because my father bought it for me.

问题发生在过去，所以要使用过去时。将“have”改为“had”，将“buys”改为“bought”。“my child try”不是正确表达，应该说“when I was a child”。另外，“bought”后面需要使用代词“it”指代自行车。

× It helps me to to to find my balance to to riding in my in my child childhood.

✓ It helped me find my balance when riding during my childhood.

“help”后面可以使用“help someone do something”，所以应说“helped me find”，不需要重复使用“to”。表达“在骑车时”时，可以使用“when riding”，而不是“to riding”。因为整段内容描述童年经历，所以“helps”应改为过去时“helped”。

× I am, of course, because bikes are, because, you know, after the COVID-19, people's much more like the outside, working and playing outside.

✓ Yes, of course. After COVID-19, people like spending more time outdoors, working and playing outside.

“people's much more like”结构错误。“people”是复数主语，后面直接使用动词“like”，不能使用所有格形式“people's”。这里是在表达现在人们的普遍喜好，因此使用一般现在时“like”。“spending time outdoors”比“like the outside”更自然。

× A bike is a very good, very good sport to make people going out.

✓ A bike is a very good way to get people to go outside.

“make”后面应使用“make + someone + 动词原形”，不能说“make people going”。如果使用“get”，结构是“get + someone + to do something”，所以应说“get people to go outside”。这里“a bike is a sport”表达不准确，改为“a bike is a good way”更符合句意。