自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答没有直接回应“小时候是否有自行车”。“Now”与“when I was a child”时态不匹配，而且“bag”应为“bike”；“I hit the bike”表达不清楚，可能想说“我骑车时控制不好”。建议先明确回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，再用过去时补充原因或经历。控制在2—3句，并使用because、but或so连接细节。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, but I wasn’t very good at controlling it, so I sometimes fell off.

建議: 回答观点明确，也提供了大学里的具体例子，整体符合基本结构。不过“bag”应为“bike”，“in our university”更自然的说法是“at my university”，“basically everyone”略显口语化且不够精确，句末的“yeah”可以删除。建议补充一个原因或结果，例如自行车价格低、方便通勤或有助于环保，并使用because或especially连接信息。

範例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular in my country, especially among university students. At my university, many students ride bikes to class because they are affordable and convenient for commuting.

× Now, to be honest, I don't have bag forever because I hit the bag I can't control that

✓ To be honest, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I couldn't control it.

问题涉及过去的童年经历，因此应使用一般过去时。将 “don't have” 改为 “didn't have”，将 “can't control” 改为 “couldn't control”。另外，根据上下文，将 “bag” 改为 “bike” 才符合问题含义。

× Now, to be honest, I don't have bag forever because I hit the bag I can't control that

✓ To be honest, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I couldn't control it.

可数名词 “bike” 以单数形式出现时，前面需要使用不定冠词 “a”，所以不能说 “have bike”，应说 “have a bike”。

× Now, to be honest, I don't have bag forever because I hit the bag I can't control that

✓ To be honest, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I couldn't control it.

“bike” 是单数可数名词，后面应使用单数代词 “it” 来指代它，而不是使用 “that”。建议先明确名词，再使用相应的人称代词。

× Now, to be honest, I don't have bag forever because I hit the bag I can't control that

✓ To be honest, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I couldn't control it.

原句把多个分句直接连接在一起，导致句子结构混乱。可以使用 “because” 连接原因从句，并在从句中使用完整结构 “I couldn't control it”。回答过去经历时，建议使用“主句 + because + 原因从句”的清晰结构。

× Yes, definitely. For example in our university basically everyone has a bag for commuting yeah.

✓ Yes, definitely. For example, at our university, basically everyone has a bike for commuting.

表示“在某所大学”这一地点时，通常使用介词 “at”，所以 “in our university” 应改为 “at our university”。此外，建议在 “For example” 后加逗号，使句子更清晰；“bag” 根据上下文应改为 “bike”。