自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly in the past tense: say “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.” Correct the word choice and grammar: “bike,” not “bite”; “cyclist,” not “cycler”; “was,” not “is”; “bought,” not “buy”; and “taught me how to ride,” not “teach me to how to cycling.” Avoid ending with “and,” and add one specific detail about how you used the bike. Use a linking word such as “because” or “so” to connect your ideas clearly.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father was a keen cyclist when he was young, so he bought me a bike and taught me how to ride it. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: Start with a clear general statement: “Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.” Use plural and countable nouns correctly: “bikes,” “companies,” and “shared bikes.” Explain the reasons in a logical order, such as bike-sharing schemes and convenience, and avoid unclear phrases like “for and” and “to shop to have a shortcut.” Use specific vocabulary such as “bike-sharing services,” “short distances,” and “avoid traffic.”

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many companies provide bike-sharing services on city streets, so people can easily rent one for short journeys. Bikes are convenient for shopping and can help commuters avoid traffic and take shortcuts.

× Yes, I have a bite when in my childhood and my father is a cycler when he was a young age, so he buy a bike for me and teach me to how to cycling.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father was a cyclist when he was young, so he bought a bike for me and taught me how to cycle.

The question asks about a past period, so the past tense is needed throughout the answer: have becomes had, is becomes was, buy becomes bought, and teach becomes taught. Keep the verb tense consistent when describing past events.

× Yes, I have a bite when in my childhood and my father is a cycler when he was he was a young age, so he buy a bike for me and teach me to how to cycling.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father was a cyclist when he was young, so he bought a bike for me and taught me how to cycle.

The expressions in my childhood and when he was a young age are not used correctly. Say when I was a child or in my childhood, and say when he was young or at a young age. Choose one natural time expression rather than combining incompatible structures.

× Yes, I have a bite when in my childhood and my father is a cycler when he was a young age, so he buy a bike for me and teach me to how to cycling.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father was a cyclist when he was young, so he bought a bike for me and taught me how to cycle.

After taught me how to, use the base form of the verb: how to cycle, not how to cycling. The structure is teach or taught someone how to do something.

× Yes, I have a bite when in my childhood and my father is a cycler when he was a young age, so he buy a bike for me and teach me to how to cycling and.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father was a cyclist when he was young, so he bought a bike for me and taught me how to cycle.

The original sentence contains several incomplete or incorrectly connected clauses, including teach me to how to cycling and the final and. Divide the ideas into two complete sentences and use the structure taught me how to cycle.

× Yes, I think bike is popular because there are some company to have a sharing bike in the street and for and it is a really useful for people to shop to have a shortcut.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular because there are some companies that provide bike-sharing services on the streets. Bikes are really useful because they help people shop and take shortcuts.

Use the plural noun bikes when speaking about bicycles in general. Companies must also be plural after some because some refers to more than one company. Use companies that provide rather than some company to have.

× Yes, I think bike is popular because there are some company to have a sharing bike in the street and for and it is a really useful for people to shop to have a shortcut.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular because there are some companies that provide bike-sharing services on the streets. Bikes are really useful because they help people shop and take shortcuts.

The subject bikes is plural, so it requires are, not is. The phrase there are must be followed by a plural noun, so companies is required instead of company. Make sure the verb agrees with its subject.

× Yes, I think bike is popular because there are some company to have a sharing bike in the street and for and it is a really useful for people to shop to have a shortcut.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular because there are some companies that provide bike-sharing services on the streets. Bikes are really useful because they help people shop and take shortcuts.

The there are structure is used to introduce plural nouns. After there are, use companies, not company. Also, use a relative clause such as that provide bike-sharing services to explain what the companies do.

× Yes, I think bike is popular because there are some company to have a sharing bike in the street and for and it is a really useful for people to shop to have a shortcut.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular because there are some companies that provide bike-sharing services on the streets. Bikes are really useful because they help people shop and take shortcuts.

Do not use a before the adjective useful when useful is used as a complement after the plural subject bikes. Say bikes are really useful, not it is a really useful. Use bike-sharing services as a natural noun phrase.

× Yes, I think bike is popular because there are some company to have a sharing bike in the street and for and it is a really useful for people to shop to have a shortcut.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular because there are some companies that provide bike-sharing services on the streets. Bikes are really useful because they help people shop and take shortcuts.

The conjunctions and and for are repeated and do not connect the ideas correctly. Use because to give a reason and and to connect the verbs shop and take. Avoid adding conjunctions that do not have a clear grammatical function.

× Yes, I think bike is popular because there are some company to have a sharing bike in the street and for and it is a really useful for people to shop to have a shortcut.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular because there are some companies that provide bike-sharing services on the streets. Bikes are really useful because they help people shop and take shortcuts.

The original answer contains several incomplete and poorly connected phrases, such as to have a sharing bike and to shop to have a shortcut. Use complete clauses: companies that provide bike-sharing services and bikes help people shop and take shortcuts.