自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你没有回答考官的问题，而是重复并改写了问题，因此无法展示词汇、语法和连贯性。应先直接回答“有”或“没有”，然后补充一到两个具体细节，例如骑车的时间、地点、用途或感受。注意使用正确的表达“when you were a child”，而不是“when you were child”。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

建議: 你没有回答关于自行车的问题，而是把关键词改成了“bags”，所以答案与题目不相关。应先明确表达观点，例如“Yes, I think bikes are quite popular”，然后用原因和具体例子支持观点。可以使用“because”“especially”或“for example”等连接词，使答案更自然、更有逻辑。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and young adults. They are affordable and convenient for short journeys. For example, many people ride bikes to school, work, or nearby shops.

× Did you have a bag when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bag when you were a child?

可数名词单数“child”前通常需要冠词。这里表示“一个孩子”，所以应使用不定冠词“a”。固定表达是“when you were a child”，意思是“当你还是个孩子的时候”。