自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly, but correct the unclear phrase “ride to eat to park” to “ride to the park.” Use a linking word such as “Also” before the final detail, and explain why the bright color was useful. Avoid repeating “with my friends” unless it adds meaningful information.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was eight. I used to ride it to the park every afternoon with my friends. Also, it was bright red, so my parents could spot me easily.

建議: State your opinion clearly and use the correct plural noun: “Bikes are popular.” Avoid repetition such as “we have we have” and “in our country.” The phrase “a share bike” should be “shared bikes,” and “pay a little money to ride everywhere” should be expressed more naturally. Add a specific reason, such as convenience or affordability.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because shared-bike services are widely available in cities. People can pay a small fee to rent one, which is convenient and affordable for short trips.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was eight. I used to ride to eat to park every afternoon with my friends and it was bright so everyone could spot me easily.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was eight. I used to ride to the park every afternoon with my friends, and it was bright, so everyone could spot me easily.

The phrase ride to eat to park contains an incorrect preposition and an incorrect word in the destination phrase. The natural expression is ride to the park. Use to before a destination, and use the correct noun park.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was eight. I used to ride to eat to park every afternoon with my friends and it was bright so everyone could spot me easily.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was eight. I used to ride to the park every afternoon with my friends, and it was bright, so everyone could spot me easily.

The noun park refers to a specific or familiar place in this context, so it needs the definite article the. The correct phrase is to the park.

× I think Bai is popular in our country because we have we have a share bike in our country that can pay a little money to to ride to everywhere.

✓ I think bikes are popular in our country because we have shared bikes that people can ride everywhere for a small fee.

The question asks about bikes in general, so the plural noun bikes is more appropriate than a singular form. Similarly, shared bikes is used to describe the general bike-sharing system.

× I think Bai is popular in our country because we have we have a share bike in our country that can pay a little money to to ride to everywhere.

✓ I think bikes are popular in our country because we have shared bikes that people can ride everywhere for a small fee.

Shared is the past participle form of share and functions as an adjective describing bikes. The standard expression is shared bikes, not share bike.

× I think Bai is popular in our country because we have we have a share bike in our country that can pay a little money to to ride to everywhere.

✓ I think bikes are popular in our country because we have shared bikes that people can ride everywhere for a small fee.

Everywhere is an adverb and does not need the preposition to before it. Also, for a small fee clearly expresses the payment required to use the bikes. Avoid repeating to.

× I think Bai is popular in our country because we have we have a share bike in our country that can pay a little money to to ride to everywhere.

✓ I think bikes are popular in our country because we have shared bikes that people can ride everywhere for a small fee.

The original relative clause incorrectly suggests that the bike can pay money. People pay money and ride the bikes, so people should be the subject of the relative clause. The repeated phrase we have and repeated to should also be removed to make the sentence grammatically clear.