自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly with “Yes, I had a bike.” Correct the grammar and use appropriate prepositions: say “a green bike,” “a present from my dad,” and “for my birthday.” Organize the response into complete sentences and use a linking word such as “because” to explain why the bike was special. Add one specific detail about how you used it, but avoid joining several ideas without punctuation.

範例: Yes, I had a green bike when I was a child. I often rode it to nearby parks with my friends. It was special to me because my dad gave it to me for my birthday.

建議: Start with a clear answer such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Use natural collocations like “a means of transport” rather than “a mode of transport,” and clarify the unusual idea of transporting water with a specific context or replace it with a more relevant use. Avoid the contradiction between “for centuries” and “since 1963”; give one accurate time reference or omit it. Use a linking word such as “In addition” and provide a concise, specific example of how people use bikes in daily life.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable means of transport. Many people use them to travel to work, visit relatives, or run errands in their neighbourhoods. In addition, cycling is becoming more common because it helps people save money and avoid traffic.

× Yes add a green bike that I used to visit a lot of parks with my friends I love the bike because it was a present for my dad during my birthday

✓ Yes, I had a green bike that I used to visit a lot of parks with my friends. I loved the bike because it was a present for my dad during my birthday.

The question asks about a past situation using did you have, so the answer should use past-tense verbs. Had is the past form of have, and loved is the past form of love. Use the past tense consistently when describing childhood experiences.

× Yes add a green bike that I used to visit a lot of parks with my friends I love the bike because it was a present for my dad during my birthday

✓ Yes, I had a green bike that I used to visit a lot of parks with my friends. I loved the bike because it was a present from my dad on my birthday.

Use from to show who gave the present: a present from my dad. Use on with a specific day or occasion such as on my birthday, not during my birthday.

× Yes add a green bike that I used to visit a lot of parks with my friends I love the bike because it was a present for my dad during my birthday

✓ Yes, I had a green bike that I used to visit a lot of parks with my friends. I loved the bike because it was a present from my dad on my birthday.

The original response joins several complete thoughts without appropriate punctuation. Separate the ideas into two sentences, and use a comma after Yes. This makes the response clearer and prevents a run-on sentence.

× Yes, bikes are more popular in my country because it's a mode of transport that people use to transport water and visit family members.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are a mode of transport that people use to transport water and visit family members.

More popular is a comparative form and normally requires a comparison, such as more popular than cars. Since no comparison is stated here, very popular is more appropriate.

× It's been there for centuries since around year nineteen sixty three, and people have incorporated bikes in most of their day to day life.

✓ They have been popular since around 1963, and people have incorporated bikes into most of their day-to-day lives.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use they instead. Also, they have been popular clearly refers to bikes and avoids the vague expression it's been there.

× It's been there for centuries since around year nineteen sixty three, and people have incorporated bikes in most of their day to day life.

✓ They have been popular since around 1963, and people have incorporated bikes into most of their day-to-day lives.

Use since around 1963 rather than since around year 1963. The preposition into is used with incorporate when something becomes part of something else: incorporate bikes into daily life.

× It's been there for centuries since around year nineteen sixty three, and people have incorporated bikes in most of their day to day life.

✓ They have been popular since around 1963, and people have incorporated bikes into most of their day-to-day lives.

The possessive determiner their refers to people, so the noun should be plural: lives, not life. Use lives when referring to the daily experiences of multiple people.