自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and use a clear past-tense structure. Correct “bought bought it to me” to “bought me one,” and use “ride” rather than “write.” Avoid the unfinished phrase at the end. Add one specific detail about how or where you used the bicycle, using a linking word such as “After that.”

範例: Yes, I had a red bicycle when I was six years old. My parents bought it for me, and my dad taught me how to ride it. After that, I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: State your opinion clearly and explain it with logically connected reasons. The answer has several grammar problems, including “right now is a motorbike,” “by just use electricity,” and “is safe more than modern.” Clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes, and avoid contradictory ideas such as saying a motorbike is both safer and more modern without explanation. Use linking words such as “because” and “whereas” to compare them.

範例: No, I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer motorbikes because they are faster and can cover longer distances, whereas bicycles require more physical effort. However, bicycles are still common among children and people who enjoy exercising.

× My parents bought bought it to me that is a red bicycle.

✓ My parents bought me a red bicycle.

The verb buy does not require the preposition to before the person who receives the item. Use buy someone something or buy something for someone. Also, bought should not be repeated.

× My parents bought bought it to me that is a red bicycle.

✓ When I was six years old, my parents bought me a red bicycle.

The story is about the past, so the verb be in the relative clause should also be in the past if it is used. The corrected sentence avoids the unnecessary clause and keeps the whole event clearly in the past.

× My dad taught me about how to write this.

✓ My dad taught me how to ride it.

After teach, use teach someone how to do something, not teach someone about how to do something. Ride is the appropriate verb for using a bicycle, and the infinitive form ride follows how to.

× And my dad taught me about how to write this and after that it's a.

✓ My dad taught me how to ride it, and after that, I could ride it by myself.

The original sentence contains an incomplete clause: after that it's a does not express a complete idea. A complete sentence needs a clear subject, verb, and meaningful complement.

× In my opinion, I don't think so because right now is a motorbike.

✓ In my opinion, I don't think so because nowadays there are many motorbikes.

When stating that something exists or is present, use there is for a singular noun and there are for a plural noun. Because motorbikes is plural, use there are.

× Because right now is a motorbike it can go anywhere by just use electricity.

✓ Because nowadays motorbikes can go anywhere by using electricity.

The sentence refers to motorbikes in general, so the plural noun motorbikes is more appropriate. The plural subject also takes the plural verb can go.

× It can go anywhere by just use electricity.

✓ They can go anywhere by just using electricity.

After the preposition by, use a gerund ending in -ing. Therefore, use by using, not by use.

× It is not far like a bicycle.

✓ They can travel farther than bicycles.

The comparison is about motorbikes and bicycles in general, so both nouns should be plural. The corrected sentence also expresses the intended comparison more clearly.

× It is not far like a bicycle.

✓ They can travel farther than bicycles.

When comparing two things, use the comparative form farther and follow it with than. Like does not correctly introduce this comparison.

× And is safe more than modern.

✓ They are safer than modern bicycles.

The adjective safe needs the comparative form safer when comparing safety. The word modern must modify a noun, so modern bicycles is needed.

× And is safe more than modern.

✓ They are safer than modern bicycles.

The subject they is plural, so the verb must be are, not is. The adjective safer agrees with the intended comparison.