自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本直接，也提供了购买时间和练习经历，但存在明显语法和表达问题。首先，年龄信息前后矛盾：开头说十二岁时有自行车，后面又说父母在八岁时买给你，应该明确是“我八岁时父母买了一辆自行车给我”。其次，“boy for me”应改为“bought one for me”，“had more practice on riding”应改为“practised riding”，“because it's so fun for me”应改为“because it was great fun”。建议使用“because”和“with”等连接细节，并控制在3—4句，使答案更自然、连贯。

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was eight years old, and I practised riding it almost every day. I usually went cycling with my parents or friends, which was great fun and helped me become more confident.

建議: 回答表达了“自行车很实用、便宜、方便”的观点，但语法、时态和句子结构问题较多。现在谈论本国情况，应使用一般现在时，而不是“were more popular before”；“quite more popular”用法错误，可以改为“quite popular”或“more popular than before”。“because of its It's functional”应改为“because they are practical, affordable and convenient”，并注意自行车是复数时使用“they”。建议先明确回答“是的，很受欢迎”，再用“especially”和“because”补充通勤场景，避免重复使用“and”。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among people who commute to work. They are practical, affordable and convenient, and they can help people avoid traffic jams. In recent years, shared bikes have also made cycling more common in cities.

× My parents boy for me when I was eight years old.

✓ My parents bought one for me when I was eight years old.

句子描述的是童年时期发生的事情，应该使用一般过去时。这里的“boy”不是正确的动词形式，应该使用“buy”的过去式“bought”。同时补充“one”指代前面的自行车，使句子更完整。

× Almost every day I had more practice on riding my new bike with my parents and my friends together.

✓ Almost every day I got more practice riding my new bike with my parents and friends.

“practice”后面通常直接接动名词，不需要使用介词“on”。因此应说“practice riding”，而不是“practice on riding”。

× Because it's so fun for me.

✓ Because it was so much fun for me.

整段内容是在描述过去的童年经历，所以“is”应该改为过去式“was”。“so much fun”是更自然的表达方式。

× I think bicycles are quite more popular in my country before.

✓ I think bicycles were quite popular in my country before.

“quite more popular”不能这样搭配。“quite”通常修饰形容词原级，如“quite popular”。由于“before”表示过去的情况，动词“are”也应改为过去式“were”。

× Because of its It's functional and cheap and convenient.

✓ Because they are functional, cheap, and convenient.

“bicycles”是复数名词，所以不能使用单数物主代词“its”，应使用复数代词“they”。此外，“It's”在这里与前面的“its”重复，应该删除，并使用“they are”来描述自行车的特点。

× Because of its It's functional and cheap and convenient.

✓ Because they are functional, cheap, and convenient.

原句中“because of its”和“It's”重复连接，造成句子结构混乱。“because”后面应接完整从句，因此使用“because they are...”可以形成正确、完整的结构。