自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly with “Yes, I did,” rather than “Yes, I had.” Correct the noun phrase to “two bicycles” and explain the unclear phrase “that was the very first.” Add one specific detail, such as when you received the bicycle or where you rode it. Use a linking word such as “because” or “for example” to connect your ideas naturally.

範例: Yes, I did. I had two bicycles when I was a child, and my first one was a birthday present from my parents. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: Use correct capitalization and punctuation, and avoid the ungrammatical phrase “Every people are lighting bicycle.” Say “Bicycles are popular in Japan” or “Many people ride bicycles.” Give a clear reason or example to support your answer, such as bicycles being convenient for short journeys or commonly used by students. Use a linking word such as “especially” or “because” to make the answer more coherent.

範例: Yes, I do. Bicycles are quite popular in Japan, especially in cities and residential areas. Many people ride them because they are convenient for short trips and easy to park.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the auxiliary verb did: Did you have a bike...? Therefore, the short affirmative answer should use did, not had. A useful pattern is Yes, I did or No, I did not.

× I had a 2 bicycles, that was the very first.

✓ I had two bicycles. They were my first bicycles.

The plural noun bicycles cannot be used with the singular article a. Also, two bicycles requires the plural pronoun they and the plural verb were. Use a bicycle for one bicycle and two bicycles for more than one.

× I had a 2 bicycles, that was the very first.

✓ I had two bicycles. They were my first bicycles.

The article a is used before a singular countable noun, not before a plural noun or a number such as two. Remove a when using two: I had two bicycles.

× I had a 2 bicycles, that was the very first.

✓ I had two bicycles. They were my first bicycles.

The subject bicycles is plural, so it must be followed by the plural verb were, not the singular verb was. The matching form is They were my first bicycles.

× Every people Are lighting bicycle?

✓ Everyone rides bicycles.

Everyone is the correct singular quantifier for referring to all people in general. Every people is not grammatically correct in this context. Use everyone or all people instead.

× Every people Are lighting bicycle?

✓ Everyone rides bicycles.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so the verb in the simple present needs the third-person singular ending -s: rides. Do not use the plural form ride after everyone.

× Every people Are lighting bicycle?

✓ Everyone rides bicycles.

The student is describing a general situation, so the simple present is appropriate: Everyone rides bicycles. The form are lighting does not express this general habit correctly.

× Every people Are lighting bicycle?

✓ Everyone rides bicycles.

When talking about bicycles in general, use the plural noun bicycles rather than the singular noun bicycle. The plural form is also consistent with the general meaning of the sentence.