自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你没有回答考官的问题，而是重复了问题，因此无法展示词汇、语法和连贯性。应直接回答“有”或“没有”，并补充一个具体细节。注意说“when you were a child”，而不是“when you were child”。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: 回答方向正确，也提供了便利性和环保方面的理由，但句子存在明显语法和表达问题，且最后一句没有说完。应使用“a convenient means of transportation”“many people commute by bike”和“reduce pollution”等更自然的表达，并用完整句子结束。

範例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country because they are a convenient and environmentally friendly means of transportation. Many people ride them to work, especially in crowded cities, because cycling can reduce traffic and air pollution.

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

名词“child”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。因此应说“when you were a child”。

× Yes, I think so. It's a convenient transport and there's a lot of people go to work by bikes because it's a green way to protect our environment and have less

✓ Yes, I think so. It's a convenient means of transport, and there are a lot of people who go to work by bike because it's a green way to protect our environment and produce less pollution.

“transport”通常作不可数名词使用，不能直接说“a convenient transport”。可以改为“a convenient means of transport”，表示“一种方便的交通方式”。

× Yes, I think so. It's a convenient transport and there's a lot of people go to work by bikes because it's a green way to protect our environment and have less

✓ Yes, I think so. It's a convenient means of transport, and there are a lot of people who go to work by bike because it's a green way to protect our environment and produce less pollution.

“a lot of people”是复数名词，所以There be句型中应使用“there are”，不能使用“there's”。建议先判断There be句型后面的名词是单数还是复数，再选择“there is”或“there are”。

× Yes, I think so. It's a convenient transport and there's a lot of people go to work by bikes because it's a green way to protect our environment and have less

✓ Yes, I think so. It's a convenient means of transport, and there are a lot of people who go to work by bike because it's a green way to protect our environment and produce less pollution.

“there are a lot of people go”缺少连接主句和动作的结构。可以使用关系代词“who”，改为“there are a lot of people who go to work...”。另外，句末的“have less”意思不完整，应补充名词并改为“produce less pollution”。

× Yes, I think so. It's a convenient transport and there's a lot of people go to work by bikes because it's a green way to protect our environment and have less

✓ Yes, I think so. It's a convenient means of transport, and there are a lot of people who go to work by bike because it's a green way to protect our environment and produce less pollution.

表示交通方式时，固定搭配通常是“by bike”，其中“bike”用单数，不说“by bikes”。类似表达还有“by car”“by bus”和“by train”。