自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly in the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. Use “I had a bike” instead of “I have a bike once,” and describe it naturally as “a small red bike.” Avoid hesitation and explain how you used it with a specific detail. You could say that you rode it for exercise or to visit friends. Use linking words such as “usually” or “because” to connect your ideas.

範例: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood for exercise and sometimes to visit my friends. I really enjoyed it because it gave me a sense of freedom.

建議: Give a clear answer at the beginning, such as “No, I don’t think bikes are very popular.” Then provide one or two organized reasons. Avoid repeating “in my opinion, I think,” and use accurate expressions such as “there are not enough bike lanes” and “riding on busy main roads can be dangerous.” Complete your final sentence and use linking words such as “because” and “as a result.”

範例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. There aren’t enough bike lanes, so cyclists often have to ride on busy main roads, which can be dangerous. As a result, many people prefer to use cars or public transportation.

× Yes, I have a bike once.

✓ Yes, I had a bike once.

The question asks about a past period, when you were a child, so the past-tense form had is required instead of the present-tense form have.

× It is a red colour small bike that can take me anywhere.

✓ It was a small red bike that could take me anywhere.

Because you are describing a bike you had in the past, was and could are more appropriate than is and can.

× It is a red colour small bike that can take me anywhere.

✓ It was a small red bike that could take me anywhere.

In English, size usually comes before color when multiple adjectives describe a noun. Therefore, small comes before red: a small red bike.

× In my opinion, I think it is not because of my country there's no any security or the rules or the law for the people who like to ride a bike.

✓ In my opinion, I do not think bikes are popular in my country because there are no safety measures, clear rules, or laws for people who like to ride bikes.

The original sentence contains several clauses joined in an unclear way. Use a complete main clause followed by a because-clause to express the reason clearly.

× In my opinion, I think it is not because of my country there's no any security or the rules or the law for the people who like to ride a bike.

✓ In my opinion, I do not think bikes are popular in my country because there are no safety measures, clear rules, or laws for people who like to ride bikes.

Use there are before plural nouns such as safety measures, rules, and laws. The form there is is used before a singular noun, while there are is used before plural nouns.

× In my opinion, I think it is not because of my country there's no any security or the rules or the law for the people who like to ride a bike.

✓ In my opinion, I do not think bikes are popular in my country because there are no safety measures, clear rules, or laws for people who like to ride bikes.

No and any should not normally be used together in this structure. Use no safety measures or there are not any safety measures.

× In my opinion, I think it is not because of my country there's no any security or the rules or the law for the people who like to ride a bike.

✓ In my opinion, I do not think bikes are popular in my country because there are no safety measures, clear rules, or laws for people who like to ride bikes.

The sentence refers to several types of support, so plural nouns are needed: rules and laws. The plural form also agrees with there are.

× I love the big the main road but have any bike lane Yeah and

✓ I like the main roads, but they do not have any bike lanes.

The original expression is incomplete and contains an unclear noun phrase. The corrected sentence has a subject, a verb, and a clear contrast introduced by but.

× I love the big the main road but have any bike lane Yeah and

✓ I like the main roads, but they do not have any bike lanes.

In a negative sentence, use any before a plural countable noun. Therefore, any bike lanes is correct after do not have.