自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and separate your ideas into clear sentences. Use the past tense consistently: “had,” “was,” and “used.” Also, say “an orange bicycle,” not “a orange color bicycle,” and avoid the redundant phrase “to school and my classes.” Add one specific detail, such as how often you rode it or how you felt about it.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was in Grade Five. It was orange, and I used to ride it to school every day. I really enjoyed cycling because it was convenient and gave me some exercise.

建議: Give a clear answer first, then support it with one or two reasons. Avoid repeating “I think” and “vehicle” and do not repeat the same phrase several times. Use more natural expressions such as “bicycles are very common” or “we see many people riding bikes.” You could also mention a specific group of cyclists or explain why bikes are popular, using a linking word such as “because” or “for example.”

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially among students and delivery workers. They are affordable and convenient for short journeys, so we often see people riding them on busy roads. However, many people still prefer cars for longer trips.

× Yes I had a bicycle when I was in grade five it is a orange color bicycle and I use it to go to school and my classes.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was in grade five. It was an orange-colored bicycle, and I used it to go to school and attend my classes.

The article a must change to an before the vowel sound in orange. Use an orange-colored bicycle, not a orange color bicycle.

× Yes I had a bicycle when I was in grade five it is a orange color bicycle and I use it to go to school and my classes.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was in grade five. It was an orange-colored bicycle, and I used it to go to school and attend my classes.

Orange-colored is the correct adjective form for describing the bicycle. Orange color bicycle is not a natural adjective structure in English.

× Yes I had a bicycle when I was in grade five it is a orange color bicycle and I use it to go to school and my classes.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was in grade five. It was an orange-colored bicycle, and I used it to go to school and attend my classes.

The question asks about a past period, so use the past-tense forms was and used instead of is and use. Keep the tense consistent when describing past experiences.

× Yes I had a bicycle when I was in grade five it is a orange color bicycle and I use it to go to school and my classes.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was in grade five. It was an orange-colored bicycle, and I used it to go to school and attend my classes.

The original answer joins several complete ideas without appropriate punctuation. Separate the ideas into two sentences and use attend my classes to make the second purpose parallel with go to school.

× Yes, I think it is I think bikes are the most popular vehicle in the vehicle in the vehicle in our country because when we are on the road bikes are the vehicle we see the most.

✓ Yes, I think they are the most popular vehicles in our country because, when we are on the road, bikes are the vehicles we see most often.

The pronoun they refers to bikes, which is plural. Do not use the singular pronoun it or the singular verb is when referring to plural bikes.

× Yes, I think it is I think bikes are the most popular vehicle in the vehicle in the vehicle in our country because when we are on the road bikes are the vehicle we see the most.

✓ Yes, I think they are the most popular vehicles in our country because, when we are on the road, bikes are the vehicles we see most often.

Bikes is plural, so vehicle should be plural when it refers to bikes in general. Use vehicles instead of vehicle.

× Yes, I think it is I think bikes are the most popular vehicle in the vehicle in the vehicle in our country because when we are on the road bikes are the vehicle we see the most.

✓ Yes, I think they are the most popular vehicles in our country because, when we are on the road, bikes are the vehicles we see most often.

The answer contains an incomplete repeated structure: I think it is I think and in the vehicle in the vehicle. Remove the repetition, use commas around the time clause, and organize the sentence into one clear main clause with a because clause.