自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and avoid unnecessary fillers such as “uh,” “umm,” and “Yes, that’s all.” Use accurate past-tense forms: “my dad bought it for me,” “after I learned the basics,” and “I got a bigger one.” Add one specific detail about how or where you used the bike to make the answer more engaging.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me, and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood. After I outgrew it, I got a bigger one. I still use that bike occasionally.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Avoid unclear words such as “industries” and “the last centuries,” and use “ride a bike” rather than “drive a bike.” Use linking words such as “because” and “as a result,” and remember subject-verb agreement: “it makes it easier.”

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people ride them because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. In recent years, the government has built more bicycle lanes, so cycling has become safer and easier. Students and office workers often use bikes to get around.

× my dad bought for me

✓ My dad bought it for me.

The verb bought needs a direct object. Use the pronoun it to refer to the bike. Also, begin the sentence with a capital letter.

× after I learned it's basics

✓ After I learned its basics

Its is the possessive form used to show that the basics belong to the bike. It's is a contraction of it is and is incorrect in this sentence.

× I get bigger one

✓ I got a bigger one.

The question asks about the past, so use the past-tense form got rather than the present-tense form get.

× I get bigger one

✓ I got a bigger one.

The singular countable noun one requires an article. Use a before bigger one because this refers to one nonspecific larger bike.

× It's quite popular in my country, uh, industries.

✓ Bikes are quite popular in my country.

The subject is bikes, which is plural, so use the plural verb are. The word industries does not fit the meaning and should be removed.

× the last centuries or country makes a bike Rd. so it make easier to use.

✓ Over the last few decades, our country has built bike lanes, so cycling is easier.

The original sentence is difficult to understand because the clauses are not properly connected and the phrase bike Rd. is incomplete. Use a complete sentence with clear subjects and verbs. The connector so correctly shows the result.

× so it make easier to use

✓ so cycling is easier.

The original clause has an agreement error: a singular subject requires makes, not make. The revised version uses cycling as the subject and the linking verb is, which agrees with the singular gerund phrase.