自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 質問を正しく理解できておらず、回答ではなく質問を繰り返してしまっています。まず「Yes」または「No」で直接答え、その後に具体的な経験や理由を1文加えましょう。また、「when I was a child」のように、質問に合った主語と時制を使うことが重要です。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

建議: 意見は述べられていますが、文の構造と語法に多くの誤りがあります。「I think bikes are popular in my country because they are easy to use for people of all ages」のように、主語とbe動詞を正しく使いましょう。「in my country」の重複を避け、「young or older」ではなく「people of all ages」とすると自然です。さらに、通勤や健康などの具体的な理由を加えると、内容がより明確で効果的になります。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and easy to use for people of all ages. Many people ride them for exercise or to commute to work.

× Did you have a time with our child when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The pronoun our refers to the speaker and another person, so it does not fit this question. Also, the phrase a time with our child does not express the intended meaning. Use the noun bike to answer the examiner's question accurately.

× I think bikes popular my country in my country because bikes is really fairly easily applied for people young or older.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because they are fairly easy for both young and older people to use.

The sentence needs a complete clause structure. After the subject bikes, use the linking verb are. The phrase popular my country also needs the preposition in. The pronoun they avoids repeating bikes, and the final phrase is reorganized to make the sentence clear and natural.

× I think bikes popular my country in my country because bikes is really fairly easily applied for people young or older.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because they are fairly easy for both young and older people to use.

Bikes is plural, so it must take the plural verb are, not is. The pronoun they is also plural and therefore correctly takes are. Remember to match plural subjects with plural verbs.

× I think bikes popular my country in my country because bikes is really fairly easily applied for people young or older.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because they are fairly easy for both young and older people to use.

Easy is the appropriate adjective to describe bikes. Applied does not fit the intended meaning here, and easily is unnecessary. The natural expression is easy for someone to use. Also, young and older should come before people in this noun phrase.