自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: use “Yes, I did” or “Yes, I had.” Also, “I have a motorbike than Amchal” is unclear and grammatically incorrect. State what kind of bike you had and add one specific detail, such as who gave it to you or how you used it.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small motorbike when I was a child. My father gave it to me, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

建議: Use “bikes,” not “bags,” and avoid repeating “in India.” The phrase “bags running around” is incorrect; say that people ride bikes or that there are many bikes on the roads. Give a clear reason, such as affordability, convenience, or heavy traffic, and use a linking word like “because.”

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in India because they are affordable and convenient. You can see many people riding them on busy roads, especially in crowded cities. They are also useful for commuting and avoiding traffic.

× Yes I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the past-tense auxiliary did: Did you have a bike...? Therefore, the short answer should use did, not have. A comma is also needed after Yes.

× I have a motorbike than Amchal.

✓ I had a motorbike when I was a child.

The question asks about a childhood experience, so the past tense had is required instead of the present-tense have. Adding when I was a child makes the time reference clear.

× I have a motorbike than Amchal.

✓ I had a motorbike like Amchal's when I was a child.

Than cannot be used after the noun phrase a motorbike by itself. To show that the motorbike was similar to Amchal's, use like + possessive noun: like Amchal's. The verb had is used because the answer refers to the past.