自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời đi đúng trọng tâm và có lý do khá tự nhiên. Tuy nhiên, “bought with me” cần sửa thành “bought for me”; “ride to school and commute” bị lặp ý; “failed” có thể là lỗi dùng từ, nên sửa thành “felt” hoặc “gave me”; ngoài ra, nên giữ thì quá khứ nhất quán bằng cách dùng “loved” thay vì “love”. Hãy sử dụng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm thói quen và cảm nhận cá nhân bằng từ nối như “because”.

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my father bought me a bicycle, and I used to ride it to school and around my neighborhood with my friends. I loved cycling because it was enjoyable and gave me a sense of freedom.

建議: Câu trả lời có cấu trúc tốt, trả lời trực tiếp, đưa ra ví dụ và lý do cụ thể. Để chính xác và tự nhiên hơn, sửa “faster than car” thành “faster than cars” hoặc “faster than a car”, “short distance” thành “short distances”, và thêm dấu phẩy sau “In addition”. Có thể dùng “cost-effective” với dấu gạch nối và tránh lặp “commuting” bằng cách diễn đạt gọn hơn.

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many students cycle to school because bikes are cost-effective and can be faster than cars in heavy traffic. In addition, they are convenient for short-distance travel and daily transportation.

× When I was a child, I had a bicycle which my father bought with me.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bicycle which my father bought for me.

Use the preposition 'for' when someone purchases something on behalf of another person. 'Bought with me' suggests that your father purchased the bicycle together with you.

× I used to ride to school and commute and I love cycling around the neighborhood with my friends because it failed and gave me a sense of freedom.

✓ I used to ride to school and commute, and I loved cycling around the neighborhood with my friends because it failed and gave me a sense of freedom.

The answer describes a past experience, so 'love' should be changed to the past tense 'loved' to maintain consistent tense with 'was' and 'used to ride.'

× For example, many students cycle to school because bicycles are cost effective and often faster than car in heavy traffic.

✓ For example, many students cycle to school because bicycles are cost-effective and often faster than a car in heavy traffic.

Use the indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'car' when referring to a car in general. The compound adjective 'cost-effective' is also normally written with a hyphen.

× In addition they are convenient for short distance and everyday commuting.

✓ In addition, they are convenient for short distances and everyday commuting.

When referring to short distances in general, use the plural form 'distances.' Also, place a comma after the introductory phrase 'In addition.'