自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and use grammatically accurate structures. Say “I didn’t have a bike” rather than “I didn’t have any bike,” “I didn’t like bikes” rather than “I don’t like bike,” and “my father had a bike” rather than “my father have bike.” Also, avoid repeating “bike” and clarify that you rode your father’s bike, perhaps by explaining where or when you used it.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike of my own when I was a child because I wasn’t particularly interested in cycling. However, my father had one, and I sometimes rode it around our neighborhood. I enjoyed using it on weekends, especially when I went to the park with my friends.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and develop it with one or two specific reasons. Correct “it is so convenient and cheap” to “they are convenient and inexpensive,” because “bikes” is plural. Avoid hesitations and incomplete phrases such as “Moreover, it is” and “St. uh be her cars.” You could explain that bikes are especially useful for avoiding traffic in crowded cities.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient, affordable, and environmentally friendly. They are especially common in crowded cities, where people use them to avoid traffic jams. For example, many students and office workers cycle short distances instead of taking a bus or driving.

× No, I didn't have any bike when I was a child because I don't like bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't like bikes.

The question refers to the past, so the verb like should also be in the past tense: didn't like. Use the past tense consistently when describing childhood experiences.

× No, I didn't have any bike when I was a child because I don't like bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't like bikes.

Use the indefinite article a before the singular countable noun bike when referring to one bike. When speaking about bikes in general, use the plural form bikes without an article.

× But yeah, my father have bike and I most of the time I ride in my father's bike.

✓ But yeah, my father has a bike, and I ride my father's bike most of the time.

The subject my father is third-person singular, so have must change to has in the present tense. Remember to add -s or use the irregular form has with he, she, and it.

× But yeah, my father have bike and I most of the time I ride in my father's bike.

✓ But yeah, my father has a bike, and I ride my father's bike most of the time.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a bike when introducing one bike for the first time.

× But yeah, my father have bike and I most of the time I ride in my father's bike.

✓ But yeah, my father has a bike, and I ride my father's bike most of the time.

The subject I is repeated unnecessarily in I most of the time I ride. Use one clear subject and place the time expression in a natural position: I ride my father's bike most of the time.

× But yeah, my father have bike and I most of the time I ride in my father's bike.

✓ But yeah, my father has a bike, and I ride my father's bike most of the time.

Use on rather than in with a bike because a person rides on a bike. In the corrected sentence, the possessive form my father's bike makes the relationship clear and natural.

× Yes, many people in our country ride bikes as it is so convenient and cheap.

✓ Yes, many people in our country ride bikes because they are convenient and cheap.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use they and are to agree with bikes. The conjunction because also expresses the reason more clearly.

× Yes, many people in our country ride bikes as it is so convenient and cheap.

✓ Yes, many people in our country ride bikes because they are convenient and cheap.

As can express a reason, but because is clearer and more natural in this sentence. Use because to introduce the reason that bikes are convenient and cheap.

× Moreover, it is. Umm, common transport in our country, especially in the busy St. uh be her cars.

✓ Moreover, bikes are a common form of transport in our country, especially in busy cities with heavy traffic.

The original wording contains a fragment because it is interrupts the sentence and leaves the following phrase incomplete. Use one complete clause with a subject and a verb: bikes are a common form of transport.

× Moreover, it is. Umm, common transport in our country, especially in the busy St. uh be her cars.

✓ Moreover, bikes are a common form of transport in our country, especially in busy cities with heavy traffic.

The singular countable noun form needs the indefinite article a in a common form of transport. Also, use the plural noun cities when referring to cities generally.